DOMINION-Industry Freestyle 2(In$ane)

[In$ane $hane]

*acapella*

Jay sed numbers dnt lie, but mutha****az check da stats/
Jus cuz a ni99a move units, dat dnt mean dat he could rap/
How u got a million dollar deal & all ya fuccin bars is wack/
When there’s hood ni99az on street corners spitting fuccin CRACK/
In$ane! Da rap repo man bout 2 take u ni99az plaques/
So dnt walk around witt ya whole profit jus 2 say u gotta stack/
Cuz any ni99a walking around witt 3grand in they pocket but got nuthin in da bank/
Is not in ma rank…/
In$ane sicker than burnt sluts/
Witt bars that’ll push ya wig back like old barbers who cant cut/

& best believe deez bars aint prejudice dude/
Cant find you & we knitting ya sweater like SnOman do/
But on another note, if I let ma chain hang low/
Will I get a Banknote? I really don’t know/
Actually its like I dnt really care to try/
I rather fill ma lyrical ratchet, & let dem things Fly/

Cant sell out, dats a loss & Yall already kno im way 2 smart for dat,
Intellect made me a boss way b4 dem jay-z hats came back/
Da Baseball bat, 8tracks & Kobe & Shaq/
Nah chill,lol….I aint dat old/
Still in High School, 8th grade Is wen dat 1st tape got sold/
A lil ni99a ballin, damn yo, ma wallet couldn’t even fold/
& In hood sales I still think ma shyt went gold/
But im still going line for line,
In cyphers still going rhyme for rhyme/
On tracks, still on da race to get signed/
So if im on ma grind, of course imma have success on ma mind/

In$ane
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[IvIdividual]

I liked this right here...

"But im still going line for line,
In cyphers still going rhyme for rhyme/
On tracks, still on da race to get signed/
So if im on ma grind, of course imma have success on ma mind/"

...other than that...well...It looks like your typical battle rap again. I think you have the potential to be a talented writer if you break the boundry of the persona youre on now. Dig a little bit deeper and give your creativity a run for its money.

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IvI