My Escape

[sn0man]

in someone elses shoes

My Kinfolk gettin cash sellin heroin in pill form
Oxycontin, the producer of death, addicts, and stillborns
I feel for em, raised by an addict I damn near killed for em
Cried when I realized moms was a slave to the substance
Stealin and doin w/e so she felt the greatest of rushes
Sn0 fvcked with the bud but the pill he hated to touch it
Curiosity almost brought an end to the sn0
Only took 1 time to let it enter the nose
6 months as an indentured servant Till I ripped my contract
But it was a long 6 months Ill never get the time back
Atached to a chain and ball, with my nasal clogged
saw 3 friends drink and pill, for all of them it was a fatal flaw
the tag team made their system slow down
their breathing and heart rhythm broke down
Now sn0 is under investigation for breaking and entering
Im only 17 this can't be my fate you gotta be sh1ttin me
every day need cash for this raw hate that Im sniffin B
if you my friend and got valuables.....you better be ditchin me
I realized I was inhuman, Had to escape this existance
I hate what Ive become I need to escape the dependance
Pops took me in, healed me, I twisted and turned in my sleep
my whole body hurt my flesh burned for a week
the road to healing was paved with pain n striving
the only way to broach the feeling can be explained in writing

[sn0man]

damn 9 views and no replies??

is it wack?

[blaXXX]

Originally Posted by sn0man

in someone elses shoes
My Kinfolk gettin cash sellin heroin in pill form
Oxycontin, the producer of death, addicts, and stillborns
I feel for em, raised by an addict I damn near killed for em
Cried when I realized moms was a slave to the substance
Stealin and doin w/e so she felt the greatest of rushes
Sn0 fvcked with the bud but the pill he hated to touch it
Curiosity almost brought an end to the sn0
Only took 1 time to let it enter the nose
6 months as an indentured servant Till I ripped my contract
But it was a long 6 months Ill never get the time back
Atached to a chain and ball, with my nasal clogged
saw 3 friends drink and pill, for all of them it was a fatal flaw
the tag team made their system slow down
their breathing and heart rhythm broke down
Now sn0 is under investigation for breaking and entering
Im only 17 this can't be my fate you gotta be sh1ttin me
every day need cash for this raw hate that Im sniffin B
if you my friend and got valuables.....you better be ditchin me
I realized I was inhuman, Had to escape this existance
I hate what Ive become I need to escape the dependance
Pops took me in, healed me, I twisted and turned in my sleep
my whole body hurt my flesh burned for a week
the road to healing was paved with pain n striving
the only way to broach the feeling can be explained in writing

you too much for 'em over here sn0, and...
you do a special forest-fire-blazin'em right here;
6 months as an indentured servant Till I ripped my contract
But it was a long 6 months Ill never get the time back
Atached to a chain and ball, with my nasal clogged
saw 3 friends drink and pill, for all of them it was a fatal flaw
the tag team made their system slow down
their breathing and heart rhythm broke down
Now sn0 is under investigation for breaking and entering
Im only 17 this can't be my fate you gotta be sh1ttin me
every day need cash for this raw hate that Im sniffin B
if you my friend and got valuables.....you better be ditchin me
I realized I was inhuman, Had to escape this existance
I hate what Ive become I need to escape the dependance

[Sleeps Thoreau]

the delivery was tight
the way you switched up with the flow
the content was nice
i think it was tighter in the first half
but the whole piece withstood
so u carried it

[sn0man]

props guys I thought I would never get feed on this lol

[MaCRonI]

Ayo sn0man..I'd say you gotta make sure to be inivative...ya mean in termso f flow hell yeah...it flowed consitency and well...you're showing soem shining vocab as well as indentured servant...nice!!!! My thing is that you may wanna make you spits a lil more complex with say mutlisyllable.......focus and you'll see yourself develop!!!! Nice drop!!!!

8/10

[Child Proof]

Damn, I missed this one...real nice drop fam!!!

[sn0man]

thanks