my lyrical version on kanye's my way home beat!!

[JonMen]

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read carefully it sounds better when am on the beat

my grandmother's sayin it's hot like a furnace
old folks keep sayin' young’s no Sunday service
this music nowadays a cold blooded menace
the 4+3's is back our turn is
charcoal face's on white coloured jerseys
united in white's an black's
it's a choice for shorty, either weave or afro pack's
metaphoric compositions it lacks
lil African’s gotta stand like a rebel
but, he's a daily meal for the devil
godly holy water's cursen then
they say they would rather switch than tuh fight with ben
I soon felt angels on my shoulder
I choose to go further
my fashion statement is one of S.Carter
a box full of emotions
pick one you won
you'll freeze like a picture till yuh time is done
2 O' clock on some days annoyed by hov witnesses
lil *****s in big *****s freak out where the law is
ah choose a career an hip hop's my employment
educated permanently by the masses who sent
this, is the classical inspirational genre
keep it close to yuh yeah

they say ghetto's to precious
they say the minds plus reality cop daily bread messages
they say blacks should give white expenses
follow hip hop today the way u should kanye west this
walk through ah city where the eyes on you
the time's now officially quarter to 2
black power to the people where’s the people, where’s the people
one million with a force that's equal
george bush doesn’t care about who
face facts, facts exposin' um through..
the livin legend cooked up a dish so digest some food
I see reflections in rap music that's the crack music
God praises, ya can't waste this blessin'
playin' a tribe called quest with a positive mention
this is free to all readers an citizens
the young hov centred announcements an made critics in
BLACK MUSIC