Freedom

[Black N Proud]

I want freedom.
My heart bleeds for freedom.
I want freedom from all this madness.
I want freedom from all this sadness.

I want freedom.
My eyes cry for freedom.
I am tired of crying all night.
I am tired of holding those covers tight.

I want freedom.
My soul yearns for freedom.
I want freedom to ring.
I want freedom to come and sing to me.
Freedom is something I beg to see!
Freedom, lady why won't you come and rescue me?

[sexydeltagirl]

Originally Posted by Black N Proud

I want freedom.
My heart bleeds for freedom.
I want freedom from all this madness.
I want freedom from all this sadness.

I want freedom.
My eyes cry for freedom.
I am tired of crying all night.
I am tired of holding those covers tight.

I want freedom.
My soul yearns for freedom.
I want freedom to ring.
I want freedom to come and sing to me.
Freedom is something I beg to see!
Freedom, lady why won't you come and rescue me?

I like this....
Keep up the good work...keep those poems coming.....

[Black N Proud]

Originally Posted by sexydeltagirl

I like this....
Keep up the good work...keep those poems coming.....

Thank you, I appreciate the encouragement!!! And I will!!!

[homeyjay]

Originally Posted by Black N Proud

I want freedom.
My heart bleeds for freedom.
I want freedom from all this madness.
I want freedom from all this sadness.

I want freedom.
My eyes cry for freedom.
I am tired of crying all night.
I am tired of holding those covers tight.

I want freedom.
My soul yearns for freedom.
I want freedom to ring.
I want freedom to come and sing to me.
Freedom is something I beg to see!
Freedom, lady why won't you come and rescue me?

Say BNP don't be bashful now tell us what you really want? j/k I hear you loud and clear. Sometimes what we want if we just sit back for a moment and reflect we might just have it although not in the abundance that we wish, or sometimes it's like that check in the mail thing when you finally stop looking for it is turns right up. I really hope you find your freedom and just remember to control it and not let it control you, peace. hj

[Ice Cold EX]

damn! that poem was nice and ambitious Black, but that commentary was real Homey.
sometimes our freedom can become our vice and corruption. in turn, our freedom may become our enslavement. ...hhmmmmm.....on that note...maybe I should get the hell off this internet and go to sleep..

[Black N Proud]

Originally Posted by homeyjay

Say BNP don't be bashful now tell us what you really want? j/k I hear you loud and clear. Sometimes what we want if we just sit back for a moment and reflect we might just have it although not in the abundance that we wish, or sometimes it's like that check in the mail thing when you finally stop looking for it is turns right up. I really hope you find your freedom and just remember to control it and not let it control you, peace. hj

Thank you!!! Alot of what you said is very true!!! You make some very true points, and I appreciate the positive feedback!!! Thank you again!

[Black N Proud]

Originally Posted by Ice Cold EX

damn! that poem was nice and ambitious Black, but that commentary was real Homey.
sometimes our freedom can become our vice and corruption. in turn, our freedom may become our enslavement. ...hhmmmmm.....on that note...maybe I should get the hell off this internet and go to sleep..

Thank you also!! And you also, make some very good points on "freedom" and how it can become our idol(s) or subject that we sumbit too... Very nice outlook!!! Thanks for the input!