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[sexydeltagirl]

I am so tired of this, of you...
I mean this thing we call a relationship...
I am tired of the hurt, the pain the anger and regret...
4 long years I put into this only to hear bullsh*t from you in the end...
You said things to me that cut me to the core...
But then had the nerve to turn to me with your penis erect asking, begging me to allow you inside...
Deep down inside you would be, inside so deep I though when the act was over you had turned me inside out...left all my imperfections exposed, vulnerability became my friend...
I questioned the thing we had whether fact or fiction...my feelings were true indeed but your motives I questioned...
I was under your control, oh how submissive I became your puppet of sorts, but with no strings...
I had free will in this and I decided 2 stay...
Stay longer, cry harder, beat down your chest and door with fustration..
You enrage me, fill me with utter disgust...
Yet in still I remain....
What has become of me....

Feedback?

[Thee One]

It conveys anger, regret and emotional confusion. I know the feeling. This one resonates with me.

[sexydeltagirl]

Thanks for the feedback....(hug)

[Black N Proud]

Really dark, but yet that's apart of life... I like it.. You paint pictures so well with words... Nice work!

[sexydeltagirl]

Originally Posted by Black N Proud

Really dark, but yet that's apart of life... I like it.. You paint pictures so well with words... Nice work!

Thanks for the kind words,

[Black N Proud]

Originally Posted by sexydeltagirl

Thanks for the kind words,

I was just heading to bed and decided to check this forum once more, and had seen you replied... Just thought I would respond back before going to bed...

You welcome, anytime!!!

[Ice Cold EX]

...yyyep. Its official!
yall just had the most pleasant conversation in the history of the flippin internet.
-----Skalla

[Verbinh]

Shiit seemt like it hurted you.

Stay strong.


That's why i don't be messing with relationships.

[homeyjay]

Originally Posted by sexydeltagirl

I am so tired of this, of you...
I mean this thing we call a relationship...
I am tired of the hurt, the pain the anger and regret...
4 long years I put into this only to hear bullsh*t from you in the end...
You said things to me that cut me to the core...
But then had the nerve to turn to me with your penis erect asking, begging me to allow you inside...
Deep down inside you would be, inside so deep I though when the act was over you had turned me inside out...left all my imperfections exposed, vulnerability became my friend...
I questioned the thing we had whether fact or fiction...my feelings were true indeed but your motives I questioned...
I was under your control, oh how submissive I became your puppet of sorts, but with no strings...
I had free will in this and I decided 2 stay...
Stay longer, cry harder, beat down your chest and door with fustration..
You enrage me, fill me with utter disgust...
Yet in still I remain....
What has become of me....

Feedback?

This one reminds me of that classic by the Spinners "everybody plays the fool", which is so true. One can only hope that in the end it was worth it. I hope that you come out on top SDG, usually if you are sincere the odds are in your favor you just have to suffer a little more than others however but it's all good in the end and the after thought is that you'd do it again if you had to so stay up!

[sexydeltagirl]

Originally Posted by homeyjay

This one reminds me of that classic by the Spinners "everybody plays the fool", which is so true. One can only hope that in the end it was worth it. I hope that you come out on top SDG, usually if you are sincere the odds are in your favor you just have to suffer a little more than others however but it's all good in the end and the after thought is that you'd do it again if you had to so stay up!

Thanks for those words homejay, I was in some sh*t at one point in my life, but I came out of it...with many lessoned learned.....

[Dmac]

dat was gud no doubt

[sexydeltagirl]

Originally Posted by Dmac

dat was gud no doubt

Thanks,

[MOREOVER]

Sad to say it, but I feel like that poem spoke the words of a girl I know who couldnt communicate her feelings... You are a universal woman!

[sexydeltagirl]

Originally Posted by MOREOVER

Sad to say it, but I feel like that poem spoke the words of a girl I know who couldnt communicate her feelings... You are a universal woman!

Thanks MO' I appreciate the love.....