Hey Skater, no need for an apology we all have been there one time or another.
There's darkness in this piece big-time which is obviously the result of your current and unfortunate situation, and it's also is mixed with a little dash of artistic depth. I really like the line that goes " And a cold wind blows through my soul ' that's writing to me. May you have closure soon I am looking forward to reading more of your Skaterisk pieces like the athlete is strong so, get over this funk my sister and get to gettin'. HJ.
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Like snake venum - h.j.
Last edited by homeyjay; 10-28-05 at 06:35 PM.
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