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Old 10-27-05, 03:01 AM
skatethewall skatethewall is offline
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Hey y'all, just trying to get through this so I can write again, forgive this!

I thought I knew you
I thought we were in love
Imagine what it is like to wake up and find it was all a lie
You hurt me so deep that it severed my love
And you don’t care
I know the meaning of the word dumped now
I can’t even yearn for you anymore because I know that it wasn’t even real
The mask came off and I saw that you didn’t love me at all
Emptiness stands where the warmth and excitement of love once was
It was all an illusion
And I believed you
My worst sin was loving you and wanting no one else
You just used me and pretended to love me
You put on the face of love
To get what you wanted and then some
And then completely abandoned me
It’s just that love has died and I am mourning
I am a fool
And a cold wind blows through my soul
I don’t know if I will ever find my way back to the warmth
But I do know that our love is dead
And always will be
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Old 10-28-05, 05:24 PM
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Hey Skater, no need for an apology we all have been there one time or another.
There's darkness in this piece big-time which is obviously the result of your current and unfortunate situation, and it's also is mixed with a little dash of artistic depth. I really like the line that goes " And a cold wind blows through my soul ' that's writing to me. May you have closure soon I am looking forward to reading more of your Skaterisk pieces like the athlete is strong so, get over this funk my sister and get to gettin'. HJ.
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