Please Allow....

[sexydeltagirl]

Okay, here goes....

Allow me a little bit of your time...
Please allow me to conquer you...
Allow me to use my hands as paint brushes across your body
stroke after stoke....
Let me inhale your masculinity to defeat my fears, please be my protector when the sun goes down and night circles around me...
Be my guide through troubled water which ever this day brings...
Challenge my pursuit of you but please don't resist...
Enchant me with your mind school me to your ways I am queen in your presence I know my place...
Allow me to love you strong and deep...
Deep enough to cover your spirit with my devotion and admiration
Please allow me to lay with you, inside your arms the world stands still
What feeling of security you bring me...
Allow me to make love to you, to kiss you... allow you to plant your seed in me, (damn I'm trippin)...
Allow me to grow with you as you increase your knowledge let me be your sponge educate me....
Allow me to hold your hand and admire your fingers for everything they touch is increased in value,
Allow me to honor with cooked food, warm baths, and silence during football season...Please allow me to be your half time show...
Allow me no introduction, just allow me to give my all beautifully...

Feedback?

[Cerebral Knievel]

not bad lady.

[sexydeltagirl]

aww, thanks sweetie......

[Black N Proud]

I'm speechless!!!! Very nice work!!!

[sexydeltagirl]

Originally Posted by Black N Proud

I'm speechless!!!! Very nice work!!!

aww thanks sweetheart...

[Black N Proud]

Originally Posted by sexydeltagirl

aww thanks sweetheart...

You welcome...

[homeyjay]

Originally Posted by sexydeltagirl

Okay, here goes....

Allow me a little bit of your time...
Please allow me to conquer you...
Allow me to use my hands as paint brushes across your body
stroke after stoke....
Let me inhale your masculinity to defeat my fears, please be my protector when the sun goes down and night circles around me...
Be my guide through troubled water which ever this day brings...
Challenge my pursuit of you but please don't resist...
Enchant me with your mind school me to your ways I am queen in your presence I know my place...
Allow me to love you strong and deep...
Deep enough to cover your spirit with my devotion and admiration
Please allow me to lay with you, inside your arms the world stands still
What feeling of security you bring me...
Allow me to make love to you, to kiss you... allow you to plant your seed in me, (damn I'm trippin)...
Allow me to grow with you as you increase your knowledge let me be your sponge educate me....
Allow me to hold your hand and admire your fingers for everything they touch is increased in value,
Allow me to honor with cooked food, warm baths, and silence during football season...Please allow me to be your half time show...
Allow me no introduction, just allow me to give my all beautifully...

Feedback?

Now don't take this the wrong way, this is just my perspective, good from a woman's point of view but speaking as a brother this is a smothered chicken dinner with way too much gravy, a piece like this would make a brother nervous as heck. I'd be making excuses like i think i left my door unlocked or something just to get out man,unless he was kicked in the butt by love this poem has shotgun wedding written all over it. again that's just me talking but if it's too good to be true then you better watch out that's my motto.
but good writing though and no offense intended.

[sexydeltagirl]

Originally Posted by homeyjay

Now don't take this the wrong way, this just my perspective, good from a woman's point of view but speaking as a brother this a smothered chicken dinner with way too much gravy, a piece like this would make a brother nervous as heck. I'd be making excuses like i think i left my door unlocked or something just to get out man,unless he was kicked in the butt by love this poems has shotgun wedding written all over it. again that's just me talking but if it's too good to be true then you better watch out that's my motto.
but good writing though and no offense intended though.

Thanks for the feedback homeyjay
Sometimes you men can do that to a girl....

[Ice Cold EX]

That was good stuff. On the contrary to homeslice^^^opinion,I like to smother my women in goodness.People nowadays suspect if things are going good then something must be wrong.
I can only take things as they sent to me.
I appreciate some appreciation
Mad good!!!


---Skalla

[sexydeltagirl]

Originally Posted by Ice Cold EX

That was good stuff. On the contrary to homeslice^^^opinion,I like to smother my women in goodness.People nowadays suspect if things are going good then something must be wrong.
I can only take things as they sent to me.
I appreciate some appreciation
Mad good!!!


---Skalla

Thanks for the feedback, and I totally agree....

My future man should be treated like the King he is, why wouldn't I want to make him feel good....

[slave2aplaya]

Beautiful,emotive,true,felt every word.
Keep on...

[BumpyKnucks]

marry me

[Nadira...Rare]

understood... ur knocked over by love... im no hater but be careful. im all for happy endings tho so be it

[Sigy]

I like it. its a bit much but i like it lol

[Thee One]

I like it when a girl comes on strong...it's a refreshing breath of air.