New WIZE Music

[W.I.Z.E.]

YES SIR!!!


http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/truewise_music.htm

[oso negro]

unfinished product- listen to talib kweli at all? you've got a cool voice, mang. make a pop guard out of a hanger and some cheese cloth. i like the how the vibe and lyrics went together.

still ill- hilarious ad lib at the beginning. your flow on this one is better than the other. good intensity. i see you're experimenting with some overdubs and alternate tracks. did you make that scratch sound? man, if you could get your shyt sharper, you could bang some spits out. sharp, wize, like a bullwhip crackin a cigarette off a table's edge. nahmean?

keep workin. i can see this developing.

[W.I.Z.E.]

Good loooking Oso...yeah mic quality is a big L for me cuz I used to work in a studio...and blah blah blah...

Yes the scratches are me...on this and "Let It Go". Good lookin' on the dub tip cuz it's the first time I really did that. I did all my other verses all the way through.


I'd be interested to see what you think of "Peep Game"

[W.I.Z.E.]

Guess who's bizzack!!!

[obnoxious]

ayo wize lets get down on some ****

[Absolut da poet]

hmmnn...
not feeling your voice...totally anyway.


I like your lyrics. but that was never in question...

sometimes you seem to ..."OVER flow" on the track

you need to dumb down your lyrics...switch up the pace..

you come off a lil preachy....dont tell a nikka...just talk to me.

[W.I.Z.E.]

Originally Posted by obnoxious

ayo wize lets get down on some ****

Bigh220@aol.com

get at me kid.

[oso negro]

Originally Posted by W.I.Z.E.

I'd be interested to see what you think of "Peep Game"

sorry for the delay in response.

the quality of the track overall is pretty good. your voice is sounding real cool. the flow is pretty tight most of the time. every now and then there's a lapse, but it's cool, nothing bad. the hook's cool. i like the hype track's sound too. but man, i can hear your breath hitting that mic diaphragm. that lady's voice sounds good. she does a good job on that hook. try to tighten up your words. i like the relaxed flow and all that, but i think you could focus on word formation with your mouth a little more. i see you workin, though. nice work.

peep my ep, will ya?

[W.I.Z.E.]

Thanks for the feedback OSo....much appreciated as usual. I agree on the enunciation bit as well.


I'd peep your isht but my speakers are not working for some strange as reason. Send me an email and I'll just load it into my river and give you feedback that way. Bigh220@aol.com