Respect Tha King VS Tramayn

[tramayn]

UNlimited bars....first to 5 votes..??

[Respect the King]

Originally Posted by tramayn

UNlimited bars....first to 5 votes..??

damn.. lets not make it toooooo llong fam. nobody will read it

how about 10 - 12 lines? first to 5 votes.

[Respect the King]

Originally Posted by Respect the King

damn.. lets not make it toooooo llong fam. nobody will read it

how about 10 - 12 lines? first to 5 votes.

whats the deal?????? you wit' it or not?

[tramayn]

Originally Posted by Respect the King

whats the deal?????? you wit' it or not?

Sound good to me...so what happened in 02..check the page..i upped it..when ya had ya old name..who going first you or me.

[Respect the King]

Originally Posted by tramayn

Sound good to me...so what happened in 02..check the page..i upped it..when ya had ya old name..who going first you or me.

you know what? i remember back then i didnt have access to the internet at my place, i still dont...

im workin for bank of america now, got access at work...

so i ditched alot of battles... i still owe a couple people some verses..

dont matter who goes first fam... i got a lunch break comin' up in about an hour, i can drop somethin' then.

sound aight?

[tramayn]

*See you see me just passing thru..now you grabbing my shirt tail when you was scared to battle me back in 2002 http://www.sohh.com/forums/showthread.php?t=232419

See i been here for a mintue but i left..cuz of newbies like you i decided to let you shyne with the rest of the wack..and expose the skills you lack..im even surprised you aint sick of rap*

How you get to be the king..when i didnt pass the torch//
I been runnin Sh!t..when you was just sh!ttin on the porch//
Reading comics books thinkin of me as ya hero//
Now i got 2 kids by 2 different women and you still added up to 0//
No i gotta kick you outta my home..who gave this transvestite the throne//
Respect tha Queen aint you so cute..if we had to go to war youd be the first Puss in Boots//
Gettin fuked by troops of vast masses..i can see em runnin thru you like ghosts thru glasses//
Ya flow is "ass" so voters aint gonna care "WHO-Rectum"//
Im battling..you hookin and jabbin im bobbin and weavein//
You only throw blows to da head..to draw semen//
Ill lynch my self to show ya gurl im really hung//
Her: Aint that some Shyt..No wonder da King was on ya d!ck
In the stomach or the throat..is where i hit you first..then spit a "flow" and watch you quench ya "thirst"//
I spit ill witted..with metaphors that settle scores..i dont sell drugs i peddle whores//
Enzo..Respect tha King ill blaze all ya handles//
Then post ya head above my fireplace mantle//
How does it feel to be vamped by a vet..i bet it get ya lil rectum wet//
Im back with a vengance..in ya vincinity..with a empty bottle of Hennessey..gettin head from ya mini me//
Im now 23..you aint even seeing me..i 'came back bigger' this is a lesson//
Gotcha getting a C section
Ya credentials are sub par..ill knock ya teeth out turn ya young ass into my grandpa//

[Respect the King]

what part of 10 - 12 lines dont you understand tramayn? lol, its all good.

[tramayn]

Originally Posted by Respect the King

what part of 10 - 12 lines dont you understand tramayn? lol, its all good.

Been gone a long time mane...

[tramayn]

sup King?

[Respect the King]

im stilll here man. I will drop, you got to understand though. I can really only drop between breaks, or when its not busy here. So its kinda sticky. I could drop on a break, but damn, who wants to sit infront of their computer all day anyway? lol You feel me?

I'll hit this up hopefully wed/thursday.

No excuses, but just trying to be real about this.

[Respect the King]

aiiight... im droppin suh'en, got some extra time...

[Respect the King]

Respect dude, fella! cause im quick to slap a groupie..
forget you? never! the kid always remember the wackest newbies..
now you wanna clash with hubi? get removed from earth trick..
getted boo'd on purpose, studied ya history 'n who knew what'd surface?
i actually found "tramayn" and "wack" on a google search (b*tch)...
as for my rule on versus, i keep a good hold on tha game...
high, drunk, i've been on skid-row like Tra's Haines,
lies punk, you AINT gangsta... whatcha rep Tra? Maine?
its plain 'n simple, ill rip you 'n your ghost-writers,
odds of beatin me? *uckin long-shot like the va snipers
R-T-K is nicer in text, a threat i've been killin' vets bra,
tear 'em neck down, feed 'em to my pets if their an ex-Tra..
you'll respect the king's rule, cause this peasant aint better..
i'll brain storm 'n spit to bring more thunder than ever.
rains form and my reign forms...so sick you'd feel under the weather /

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Good verse Tramayn, nice to have you back. Hopefully we can get a vote or two on this.

[theman080]

Alright, alright, since I'm battlin both you cats I'll drop a vote to keep it fair, I'm readin both and tryin not to overlook shi* so I'll do it in categories.

Hard Hittin Verball Attacks- basically how I felt you were comin at your opponent.

Freshness- How I felt about the rhymes, if the seemed same old to me or boring or sumtin new and hot,

Relevance- Basically judgin on fillers, to me sumtin like obvious set-up bars. Ya know when sumtin seems out of place to end a flow or make a rhyme

Effectiveness - Basically how I thought your punches were landing, hard, soft, whatever.


Tramayn

Hard Hittin Verbal Attacks 9/10 - You pretty much came at RTK from beginning to end except one line when you were just talkin bout yourself, which is alright, one line is one line.

Freshness 6/10 - To me it just seemed like like you were going through the motions. You attacked at the usual places without any really venemous attacks. It was really just a laid back battle, still I enjoyed the verse.

Relevance 10/10 - This is an easy category, I just hate when people go off topic to get a flow down. You stayed on RTK

Effectiveness 7/10 - Again, I liked the verse but the punch lines were generally average. There were a few good ones, one or two bad ones, but to me, it was mostly average.

Overall 32/40 80%

RTK

Hard Hittin Verbal Attacks 9/10- Basically the same, came at your opponent the whole time.

Freshness 8/10 - I liked it, kept it short so I didn't get tired.

Relevance 10/10- Stayed on Tramayn.

Effectiveness 8/10 - The flow was on point for basically the whole thing but the punchlines weren't great, generally good but no "Oh sh*t" ones.

Overall 35/40 87.5%


Gave this one to Respect The King
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No hard feelings, that's just what I thought, anybody drop a vote on me and Tra's thread. RTK, you still need to drop the Round 2 starter wit me.

-080

[yaga]

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