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Old 09-24-04, 09:52 AM
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This might require a little thought just follow me.

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by Absolut

She rushed in Death by the touch of him
Again & again...
Tearing in the wind of sin til her soul turned cold in the lust of them just alone
She became...too
numb to the pain shown some
In the dumb of shame she told none
From the lies broken in so young
These words unspoken became ~1~
Die.
Just in her mind, he was I
4 the lack of trust in kind she cut her own sun
Why?
Was she tracing these lines of tears
Hoping pages of blood would just flood from these years and I
Felt her crying from a time of hear twisted inside
Her image as dreams so appear each
Written in the wind of fear
Moment
til breathes of mine ceased and I became "De-" inside she became me...
Souls of past in the reflection of leaves
she could see
Dancing in the fall from trees mentally
As pieces of her broken family I was, never to be. Only so a-part
We shared the Death of one heart slowly...
Together.



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Some of my more recent sh1t.
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Old 09-28-04, 12:14 PM
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Very clever, Dope.
Thanks.

I've had all these individual lines mixed up in my head for months and I wanted 2 use them but they didn't fit anything I was doing at the time. so I finally said 'fuk it' and decided to arrange them on paper and I'm not totally happy with how it was put down but I'm not gonna rewrite it (usually I would) cause I wanna see if anyone can get it the way that it is.

If they don't Fuk it *moves on*
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this was very well done man, I could sense a definite flow to the peice, Me likes
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very nice.......feeling this
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Most definitely felt this .. you're word play amazes me every time.. I felt this one on both emotional and lyrical levels.

Big ups, this was deep and on point.. exactly what poetry is about
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^^bump...Abs, this is very slick. I like it.
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touched... i like this piece
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