Project Covo SOHH ProjectCOVO Forums

Welcome Back! If you have not already done so, you MUST get a new password in order to access your SOHH Forums account. Read More.

Go Back   ProjectCOVO.com Global Forum > Elements > Open Mic Forum > Poetry Corner
Register Blogs FAQ Members List Calendar Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools
  #1  
Old 02-17-04, 02:29 AM
FaZedONE's Avatar
FaZedONE FaZedONE is offline
animal tangible
 
Join Date: Sep 2003
Reppin': MIA (missing in action)
Posts: 4,934
FaZedONE
Default Females

All of the women give me a look, but go back to their man, when he starts to get shook, hes just a dumb ass, he aint read a book, you should come with me to lay by the brooke, im sensitive to explore every nook, like a game of chess the pawn the rook, the king the queen, check the mate, but again i say im already too late, shes with some shmoe, i already know, i aint got time to waste on that hoe.

Then again i aint got no dough, but the brooke is free like hippy love fests.

So ladies if you see better, dont wait for a letter, if she aint come to me, i aint gone go get her.

Id rather die alone, smoke up and get stoned, then baby a chick, who knows shes full grown.

Stop wastin time with Neanderthals, just cuz they had the balls, to hit on you with cheesy lies, at the shopping mall. I was on the scene too, and you already knew, i was the better choice, so **** me, and **** you.

Just cause im quiet, dont mean you shouldnt try it, just cuz he can buy it, dont mean its worth it.
__________________
Underground kings back in the slab, got money respect and platinum to grab
Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old 02-18-04, 04:33 PM
Chained Soul Chained Soul is offline
Registered User
 
Join Date: Jan 2004
Reppin': My Platinum Shackles
Posts: 42
Chained Soul is on a distinguished road
Default

This is some of the worst ish i've EVER seen on this board..... congratulations, this wackness helped me decide to get off the internet and go play ball today....

ugh
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 02-22-04, 02:13 AM
FaZedONE's Avatar
FaZedONE FaZedONE is offline
animal tangible
 
Join Date: Sep 2003
Reppin': MIA (missing in action)
Posts: 4,934
FaZedONE
Default

Generally speaking poetry is romantic, and instead of doing my part and writing a nice poem i was pretty much trying to antagonize with this.

But its cool i inspired you to play ball.
__________________
Underground kings back in the slab, got money respect and platinum to grab
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 02-24-04, 02:43 PM
Sexylyte Sexylyte is offline
Registered User
 
Join Date: Oct 2003
Reppin': Ma Hood
Posts: 147
Sexylyte
Default

I like this. It reminds me of someone I know...
__________________
[i][center]Most of our feelings of frustration are ego-driven responses to the challenges we face. The ego is that part of us that loves to whine and complain. It learns to be judgmental and demanding, and it always wants to be right. The ego leads us
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 02-25-04, 12:18 PM
whoSHOTcha? whoSHOTcha? is offline
Registered User
 
Join Date: Apr 2003
Reppin': tha BX
Posts: 253
whoSHOTcha?
Lightbulb

I like this...I wasn't really feelin the rhyme scheme though, but I like the message, and I can relate...

these particular lines were hot, but it coulda been dropped better, IMO, but I was still feelin em.

"Stop wastin time with Neanderthals, just cuz they had the balls, to hit on you with cheesy lies, at the shopping mall. I was on the scene too, and you already knew, i was the better choice, so **** me, and **** you.

Just cause im quiet, dont mean you shouldnt try it, just cuz he can buy it, dont mean its worth it."


nuff respec...
__________________
and if ya don't know...now ya knoooow ni99a!!!
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 02-27-04, 11:41 PM
FaZedONE's Avatar
FaZedONE FaZedONE is offline
animal tangible
 
Join Date: Sep 2003
Reppin': MIA (missing in action)
Posts: 4,934
FaZedONE
Default

Thanks for the feedback yo, i was just tryin to drop some goofy ass stuff, about my usual frustrations with women. But overall i was about half serious, i mean
"Then again i aint got no dough, but the brooke is free like hippy love fests. "

that line kinda shows the mood.
__________________
Underground kings back in the slab, got money respect and platinum to grab
Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 01-26-06, 04:22 PM
FaZedONE's Avatar
FaZedONE FaZedONE is offline
animal tangible
 
Join Date: Sep 2003
Reppin': MIA (missing in action)
Posts: 4,934
FaZedONE
Default

4rth of july
__________________
Underground kings back in the slab, got money respect and platinum to grab
Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools

Posting Rules
Forum Jump


All times are GMT -5. The time now is 11:16 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2009, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Forums Directory <--- Lotame Behavioral Tags --- > <--- Lotame Behavioral Tags --- >
[Output: 62.59 Kb. compressed to 57.86 Kb. by saving 4.73 Kb. (7.56%)]