a short rap

[Dizzy-D]

ayo I'm running through rappers like randy moss
a kid tried f*cking with me and he lost
there is no way you gonna be beat'n me
I must be a canible the way I eat MCs
check out the f*cking style I'm tearing
a f@ggot couldnt touch this if I was Maria Carry
I'm a rough rapper at age 13, rappers I'm hurting, been ill since birth B
I bring it to your face as if my style was herpes
warning right now all stles is f*cked, known for tearing bones outta ya
I'll tear every thing out a rapper from his femur to the scalpula(sholder blade)
and I'm the rapper thats be fooling some
I break rappers easy like they was illuminum
my name is D with mad styles B
I aint no belly button but I'm outie

[Dizzy-D]

feedback would be appreciated

[Dizzy-D]

GIMME SOME FUKING FEEDBACK.... please

[Dizzy-D]

feed

[MaCRonI]

this is ight my dude. the flow was decent..but u need mad work to be honest. come more unique yo..this is ur 1st time im assuming os i wont be to harsh cuz u just started but u wanna get a handle on flow, metaphors,multisyllable rhymes, and vocab. the basic and then go on to developing your own style....get at me or any others if u want advice. as of now ur at ...
4.5/10