WAKE UP!!!! "Should've Stayed Gone" prod. By JH aka N0 Thanks by Roxx the King...

[Roxx the King]

Appreciate all the feedback I been getting this week. Imma be greedy and squeeze just a lil bit more (no 50 cent) outta you guys.

This is the intro to that SOHH produced album produced by JH aka N0 Thanks (dude is really on the rise...)

Drop ya thoughts, I usually go with a really hard track as my album intros but I tried something different this time. Besides, 24 now responsible I'm not a child....

shouldve stayed gone intro 3.mp3 - 2.48MB (http://www.zshare.net/audio/70182561bf1cf0/)

:king:

[PeterVankmen]

Appreciate all the feedback I been getting this week. Imma be greedy and squeeze just a lil bit more (no 50 cent) outta you guys.
This is the intro to that SOHH produced album produced by JH aka N0 Thanks (dude is really on the rise...)
Drop ya thoughts, I usually go with a really hard track as my album intros but I tried something different this time. Besides, 24 now responsible I'm not a child....
shouldve stayed gone intro 3.mp3 - 2.48MB (http://www.zshare.net/audio/70182561bf1cf0/)
:king:



It's quality. The flow sounds too Kanye esqe though.

I think no rims on cars/hangin in bars with stars is a lil contradictory. Like on one hand you saying you on the grown man sh1t, then the hangin with stars part you sound like a groupie.

As far as intro's go it's def 3.5 - 4 out of 5.

I would also suggest losing the Jay vocals, EVERYBODY has hov on they sh1t.

[Roxx the King]

thats a song tag (the Jay-z vocal in the beginning) N0 Thanks (JH) put on the beat. and the "hanging with the stars, just in my mind" line is about the time my wife and I had drinks with Quan (nas' former protege) at a bar in VA. Thanks for the feedback!!!

[PeterVankmen]

thats a song tag (the Jay-z vocal in the beginning) N0 Thanks (JH) put on the beat. and the "hanging with the stars, just in my mind" line is about the time my wife and I had drinks with Quan (nas' former protege) at a bar in VA. Thanks for the feedback!!!


^Ah I got it, you're on your way!

[bigmanharris]

Sounds too much like the flow on Spaceship off College Dropout. You should try a fast slow. I think it could set that beat off. Not Bone like flow, but just a much faster delivery.

[Roxx the King]

Sounds too much like the flow on Spaceship off College Dropout. You should try a fast slow. I think it could set that beat off. Not Bone like flow, but just a much faster delivery.

never considered a faster flow...lol I guess it is a lil College Dropout-ish, lol... ill play around with the flow idea tonight, thanks!!

[Roxx the King]

just once

[MACADO]

this **** is dope man. Thats a difficult way to flow so i tip my hat off to you on that. Sounds cool but cant really give u full feedbac due to ****y speakers on this laptop. Hit u later about it. sounds good so far

[Roxx the King]

Thanks, mac. I was trying to be different with the flow right there but didn't realize how college dropout influenced it was, lol. As always, thanks.