Life then Death

[Mukel]

I was born alone,
Im gonna die alone,
and when im in my coffin,
im gonna lie alone!

Im only nineteen but i feel that im older than many,
more bolder than very and more colder than neccasary,
I think a lot then drown my thoughts with drink,
its a wonder why my mind aint exploded already,
my nerves are unsteady,will i ever be ready,
cos over these past 19 years ive shed enough tears,
i cud have cried till i died, but why? who the f*ck cares,
some nights i couldnt sleep i lay and think of the worst days,
i was born a seed of a beast who beat me in the worst ways,
i know that nobody lives forever, but as for the soul,
i dont know where it goes but I know im to clever
to follow the roads made by the living,
seeing is believing and ive got my kodak,
and when i die im going to heaven i wont go back!
now hold that image for a minute,
if theres a heaven, we were here we were in it and we lived it,
i look at life like everything is education,
only death can show me what god has got me chasing,
i found my occupation in the waiting room of satan,
ive got bad blood i guess this music is my medication,
only way you can succeed in life is dedication,
thats to achieve your hopes and goals and aspirations!

[Ecliptik]

nice....no matter what i may have said in the other thread...your flow did get alot better...

good job

[Mukel]

upped

[dasoloist]

the best of the emcees become consistent with the 3-line rhymes. it gets monotonous when only two lines end with the rhyme. not bad though; topic-wise