So this is me trying to compose...

[Propaganda]

im more of a sample kind of guy...so i tried to do something from scratch and see how it goes.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/64871706cd8b4c/

[Propaganda]

yo?

[ThaGovernor]

cool.. to laid back..more movie soundtrack atmospheric sounding then hip hop..hip hop style would be to keep it more simple..its more formula type...focusing on sudden hits with a small build up the picazzo part is hot.. not bad at all..i think ive been clear

[MACADO]

yeah i c/s with almost. It does sound like some movie score type **** but it's still hip hop. I think you hittin the wrong notes wit the Piano but everything else is good man.

[Propaganda]

ty ty. yeah i had trouble getting the piano to sound right...it's in the proper key and scale and whatnot, for some reason it still sounds a bit off to me as well. maybe i have a couple bad notes in the soundfont? i dunno.

it is kind of movie score sounding, though. you're right. i'll try to shorten up the notes or just put some quick hits over melody next time.