Time's Up (Ode to a Fallen MC)

[Sicilian Spit]

Lookin at my watch it says 2:02
Blew my cool, but what the f*ck are you gon do?
If it was '01 I'd hop into that new '02
My b*tch asked me for a C-note I threw out two
Years ago at this time I was on top of the sphere
Topics was clear, onlookers stoppin in fear
But now I'm just a strong crook that's robbin ya gear
The strap planted in ya back while I talk in ya ear
Paradise was my dwelling but like a dream it vanished
I tried to work my way back but it seems I'm banished
Might seem outlandish, but it's true I fell from grace
I was in heaven, now I know that I got hell to face
The L was laced... and I OD'd on stage
Once had flows for days that left hoes amazed
But once that dro was blazed my label dropped me quick
So did every groupie ho and all them sloppy tricks
Hip-hop be thick, a dangerous profession
Free expression really only breeds regression
See me stressin? All cuz I miss the limelight
And this busted-ass watch can't even get the time right

[dat boy rh]

no talent here.

[Sicilian Spit]

Do I smell a battle?

[Neo Regular]

he doing everything he criticizes me for doing on this one. that's why i hate rappers.

[Sicilian Spit]

Actually I criticize you for having weak rhyme skills and schemes. And relax, its just a story, a one verse little thing that I wrote about an imaginary rapper who fell off. No need to talk sh*t anymore. Why yous still talkin if you are supposedly so much better anyways. You just fuelin the fire.

[ILL_FAM]

Lookin at my watch it says 2:02
Blew my cool, but what the f*ck are you gon do?
If it was '01 I'd hop into that new '02
My b*tch asked me for a C-note I threw out two
Years ago at this time I was on top of the sphere
Topics was clear, onlookers stoppin in fear
But now I'm just a strong crook that's robbin ya gear
The strap planted in ya back while I talk in ya ear
Paradise was my dwelling but like a dream it vanished
I tried to work my way back but it seems I'm banished
Might seem outlandish, but it's true I fell from grace
I was in heaven, now I know that I got hell to face
The L was laced... and I OD'd on stage
Once had flows for days that left hoes amazed
But once that dro was blazed my label dropped me quick
So did every groupie ho and all them sloppy tricks
Hip-hop be thick, a dangerous profession
Free expression really only breeds regression
See me stressin? All cuz I miss the limelight
And this busted-ass watch can't even get the time right

it was good a simple rhyme scheme but most people in here cant even do that if you know what im getting at not your best but on a storytelling basis i think it was really good :thumbsup:

i see neo is still on yer jock lmao

The L was laced... and I OD'd on stage
Once had flows for days that left hoes amazed

Gangsta Gangsta :king: