Work in Progress

[W.I.Z.E.]

U can find me in Thunderstorms run through rain drops,
catch lightning, then make sure the sun remains hot,
Then bring it back to earth I'm the Kim Kardashian,
Took a lil Brandy now the Bush I smashin' them.
embarass men, lavish when, I come off hard,
Cialis then, viagra been, fuelin' soft retards.,
I torched the yard so the other kids can't play,
I forced the par,
I'm talented, misunderstood and well feared,
With dreams to dumb out...call me Joe Budden's career.
but won't fall like the brasieer on Jamie Lynn Spears
ur punches and hooks fall short u Prince Naseem's career.
This rap isht is crazy and don't make sense,
All this rah rah spits but I don't see deaths,
Makes me think Pac and Big was done by the feds,
Cuz you cats cashin' in need reality checks.
I'm board with these games - call it a checkered pass
so all you dames - kick rocs, step up or dash

[Neo Regular]

smash atoms with liquor that's designed to kill
it's the first ***** breathin with an organic skill
I put em to the test puttin bullets
through a sheild
man my 9 breaks time it'll make ya
body YIELD...mutha****a.

[W.I.Z.E.]

smash atoms with liquor that's designed to kill
it's the first ***** breathin with an organic skill
I put em to the test puttin bullets
through a sheild
man my 9 breaks time it'll make ya
body YIELD...mutha****a.

nice...

[dat boy rh]

superb flow!

[W.I.Z.E.]

superb flow!


Thanks....


Still in progress added a few lines just now.

[Sicilian Spit]

Not your best. Some nice lines as usual. That Kim K line was kinda g*y tho. But keep at it with this one.

[Cali_Bud]

I expected more from you but it seems like you were going for the punch lines and caring less about the content of the actual verse its self. Not bad, just not what I expected from you, this would probably come off better in audio