View Full Version : Espiahi: Exodus [EP]
Neo Regular
01-09-08, 07:59 AM
I go by the name of Espiahi, family...iSmooth is the jawn.
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Thanks for years of support.
W.I.Z.E.
01-09-08, 09:03 PM
Ight man...this is how I see it..
Exodus - "Pray to God they aint a battle..or you'll be fighting your tears". - nice.
Didn't like the beat too tough for some reason. The vocals were cool. Around 1 minute into you seemed to hit your stride.
I'd like to see you flow more like you did from that through the "eager to bleed " parts.
Get em Man - Liked the beat more. More bounce and pound to it. Liked the first verse. I pretty much hated the hook. Way too basic for my taste. And the fact that you kept it going made it worst.
Second verse brought some more fire. Matter fact you killed this verse.
"You aint the type to finish no verse/but you the type to get my sh!t and twist to you think it'll work" - nice isht on this one.
Bottom line different hook this song is one of your strongest to me.
When it Touch Me - Old school type of feel good beat to me. Different flow on this one. Sounded real comfortable at the end of that first verse and that was cool.
Second and third verse were cool but nothing too crazy.
I Wonder - When I heard the beat I kinda took a step back and scratched my head. The First verse was solid to me. Another hook that didn't work for me. It wasn't as bad as the other one but it still didn't really bring the song to life to me. Plus, I feel like every other song you start off the second verse by saying "verse 2".
Second verse was the strongest to me. Liked the energy and the emphasis on words when you was talking about Matt.
Overall I don't know who does your production but I will say some of the cats in the Beat Club could prolly make better ones. Lyrics wise I've seen what you've posted so I'd continue with your isht is solid. Flow is unique which is a plus. You kinda have an off and on type flow sometimes. But it works.
Glad to see you putting stuff out.
Neo Regular
01-10-08, 08:41 PM
Thanks Wize.
You always got an unbiased vision on thangs.
thanks for holding me down.
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