I made a Don Cannon style beat

[flipn50]

check out the beat I made using a foreign sample, it's called "Fatal Fury"
on my myspace at http://www.myspace.com/therealcrookedt

and tell me what ya think
I think Clipse and Fabolous and Jeezy would rip this beat

[Aje]

you got some heat, mayne. Keep it up. I liked that first joint.

[dega]

check out the beat I made using a foreign sample, it's called "Fatal Fury"
on my myspace at http://www.myspace.com/therealcrookedt
and tell me what ya think
I think Clipse and Fabolous and Jeezy would rip this beat

not bad mayne, make those drums harder!

http://www.bksproductions.com

[kNOW.oNe]

OK, i peeped Fatal Fury. I have some constructive criticism:

i don't know what equipment/software you are using, but this lacks dynamic. it's flat, straight up. The drums don't bang, nothing stands out. You need to MIX this. All your instruments are right in the middle -- pan them, use some dynamic range -- it's very important. Use some EQ. Punch the lows, bring out the highs. Think of your tracks as a painting. You don't want to use the same colors and same shapes, vary it up. Layer ****, spread it out, send some things to the back, bring some to the front.

Keep doin your thang, you have talent, just play around with ****. Use some EFX, twiddle some knobs. The programming and sequencing is cool, but take that next step

[flipn50]

OK, i peeped Fatal Fury. I have some constructive criticism:
i don't know what equipment/software you are using, but this lacks dynamic. it's flat, straight up. The drums don't bang, nothing stands out. You need to MIX this. All your instruments are right in the middle -- pan them, use some dynamic range -- it's very important. Use some EQ. Punch the lows, bring out the highs. Think of your tracks as a painting. You don't want to use the same colors and same shapes, vary it up. Layer ****, spread it out, send some things to the back, bring some to the front.
Keep doin your thang, you have talent, just play around with ****. Use some EFX, twiddle some knobs. The programming and sequencing is cool, but take that next step

damn, that's just the right criticism that I need
I create all of the beats on Fruity Loop and I don't know much about dynamics,
i might EQ, compress, and pan a lil bit on the track, but that's it
I'mma focus more on the mixing now, instead of banging out tracks after tracks
do you have any more advices? thnx a lot