Women Before God

[Courtdog]

There was a murder on my street...

The boy creeped, 8:30 in the mourning
Just past crack of dawn, cracking the door in
Before it ends, suspense suspends time
The gun reacts like enzyme's
Pinned the crime on a love affair..

Lonelyness and dispairty filled the heart of the chemically imbalanced
Time to begin violence, get violent
Three shots, and then there was silence..
Maybe more shots happened?
In and out he blackens
Reactions he never imagined or fathomed orgasmed
Life hits a chasm
The boys in blue AND brown are out to grab him
He knows this, but wont stick around to notice
They know his motives
Trying to get away with this crime is hopeless
But he remains focused
Now his approach is, he'll flee to his sisters
Not knowing the feds got all types of transistors
They even know he's comming thru Pittsburgh
He gets there, looks to see if its clear, he's scott free!?!
15mins later, look who comes knocking.....


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[Sicilian Spit]

This was coo. Middle was strong, finished a little weak, overall I liked it though, some nice rhymes in here.

[adamackbeatz]

Loved the opening part and the middle

I like how parts of this are vague and deep, and others are up-front and literal

This is my first time reading textual hip-hop in a forum and im very impressed...you guys got a lotta talent

peace out