the illest

[Boxtones]

i'll shhit on your face, wash it off with piss,
it's a diss, you smell like fish, make a wish,
i'm not a blood or a crip, but i'll make you dead,
chop your skull off your shoulders then I rape your head,
the pain is said, in a rainbow shed,
snort the cane so dread, my brain holds red,
and that's just an understatement, i rhyme to the lyricals,
you fearin those, my flows come straight from the basement,
from the ground down under, below your freshly mowed lawn,
in a song, spittin strong, hittin bongs, for too long,
cuz i'm the illest bittch!!!!:king:

[theman080]

This may have cam off better in audio....maybe not...sounded kind of amatuer-ish at some points but it was okay. Flow was choppy, a lot of shock-value rhymes that didnt really shock....

Re-read lines 4-6 and then tell me again that my drop didnt make sense. Im just lightyears ahead of you right now...

But stay up, you have some measure of potential so just read up on other peoples drop and see what works and try to improve...

[Boxtones]

mrman are you fukkin serious?

this rhyme is a piece of shhit

i wrote it in 30 seconds for a fukkin joke to have it sound like the most horrible rap ever written just to see the ignorant comments in here

don't ever be an A&R

[Boxtones]

the pain is said, in a rainbow shed,
snort the cane so dread, my brain holds red,
and that's just an understatement, i rhyme to the lyricals,



:laugh::laugh::laugh:

this makes no sense

[Courtdog]

the pain is said, in a rainbow shed,
snort the cane so dread, my brain holds red,
and that's just an understatement, i rhyme to the lyricals,

:laugh::laugh::laugh:
this makes no sense

LMAO @ "Thats just an understatement, I rhyme to the lyricals"