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Thee One
11-11-07, 03:12 PM
Works better when it's two
I can concentrate, tell her what I'd do
I can evoke emotions, give her memories
I can stroke her ego, respond to her pleas
I can make her quake, long to be near me
I can make her wake, spend her every hour thinking of me
And I have...
She wants me truly
And me, her,
Whenever I see her booty
Whenever I see her hips
The outline of her lips
The way her ass shakes
Causes my body to awake
We struggle to remain tame
Not participate
An illicit affair
Would cause so much despair
But so much pleasure
And I'm insanely jealous
I think about who she's with
And I become overzealous
I want to hunt her down
Stalk her with nary a sound
Knock her down
From behind
Use my actions to define
Every thought that's on my mind
You think that she would?
She's dangerous
Insanely curious
The sex probably diamonesque
Insanely luxurious
Addicting too
I can already tell
That's why my mind won't allow it
Though my body won't tell
Though my body would love to delve
Deep into hers
Touch her inner passions
Spark within a natural buzz
Get her drunk off my touch
High off my kiss
Cum over and over
Till I'm the only thing that exists
Till she screams cease and desist
Till our combined lust is spent
Till she can't move an inch
Till...yeah
Till she craves only my dik
Until the night is one with the day
And her screams become a pray
Till her shouts awake the neighbors
Till only God remains
Can I convince her
That hell is heavenly
Convince her that our few hours
Can last an eternity
Can I show her
The world in less than a week
It's all that I can spare
Is it more that she seeks
And we have our differences
So maybe this is make believe
Maybe I shouldn't have left the door unlocked
Maybe she shouldn't have a key
Maybe I shouldn't have told her it's room 623
Maybe I should grab my coat and exit before she sees
Maybe...
That's her sauntering up to me
Maybe the doubts are all creeping away
Maybe I’ve lost the will to flee
Maybe...
As she places my hands on her waist
Maybe this will just be a very long day...

-Malcolm Lloyd
http://excitedfire.com

homeyjay
11-29-07, 06:07 PM
Ayo - Dude this is some straight up Prince type shyt! It's kool though, I started reading earlier, didn't think I had the stregnth to go the legnth. Glad I backed tracked and peeped it again. That'll teach me, way to let the imagination run with it, goodin'

Thee One
12-09-07, 04:53 PM
Thanks for the feedback. Wanted to reply sooner, unfortunately had some sad events in the last 2 weeks so I've been away. Anyway, good look, appreciate it.

sexydeltagirl
12-10-07, 09:36 AM
Nice, very nice! I could picture this happening....more! more! lol

dat boy rh
01-08-08, 12:53 AM
way to go! you got a poetic charm
and you carry your message smoothly.
flawless effort!
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