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the ancient
11-09-07, 04:40 PM
endless possibilities
hopeful provibility
breathing in your scent is heaven sent
blessed be, baby your all i need
the one I believe i will never leave
I hope you agree and never flee
I ain't a cavity
promise to never leave you when your mad at me
mind state is chastity duely lacking blasphemy
who said sugar and wine combined is bad for me
I'm sweet like a treat just out of your reach
I'm deep like the middle of the ocean when you wet your feet
love is free
killing the pain we're all out here dieing to live
me and my mary jane
out weighs any gain
your want clings perpendicle to your needs
dispite whats coveted
you harbor fright
its thick and hovering
I'm guilt stricken
post mortem check muttering
when will you open up your eyes and see me
its all i would ever ask and never demand
that when you look into my eyes
theres no deception, no second guessing
only love freedom and pending impressment
get syked on whats bright me in your life
you as my wife
this knife in my back fills the void
keeps the monster inside from finding that petrified little boy
awakening snow to blow in august

Thee One
11-11-07, 02:33 PM
I like it...I got drawn into it which is always a good thing. I like the flow, the enter-sentence rhymes are my favorites.

mind state is chastity duely lacking blasphemy Hot!

Absolut da poet
11-12-07, 11:16 PM
interesting..

I like it