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obnoxious
11-07-07, 01:12 AM
You know the deal....

No Biting
No Vote Swaying
No Feeding
25-30 Lines
Minimum Vet Dyck Licking
No Crying When I Win
Verses Due Within 4 Days From Now




theman080 -

I'm set scopin you, Alonzo Mourning, no Net(s) hope for you
Ya lost ya touch, George Bush approval rating...
Only retarded vets vote for you, and I remove the fading
Face it dude ya aging, the style's not impressing
SOHH dont promote drugs but the forum tellin Nox
MOVE THE KEYS... out ya house and stop texting
Its all jest so stop flexing, plus my affidavit's grimey
Nox stay livin online but his actual case is tiny
Ya lifestory is pathetic, could be told wit animated smiley's
In this bout he aint boxin wit me, I'll ox em for fukkin wit me
All Nox got is second thoughts in this 1 on 1, and the judges agree
You stutter in sprees, look like Nick Carter's ugliest neice
Rap poser but in real life he's like, 'N'Sync reunion would be sumtin to see'
You aint touchin this heat, to see it dont need a fukkin degree
Get bludgeoned wit ease, call a medical assistance as ya life slips
Should be easy since ya doctor ya flow, as in Razzia writes it
He's the blatant inspiration for this fake, a herb's failin it
Either he's Raz's aborted fetus, or AvK's worst alias
I'm leadin by wide margins, your in turn tralin it
As smooth as smooth sailing is, so proper wit tunes
I'll drop this bafoon, filled wit hot air, pop the balloon
Your nothin but Hype, small time got the fan's clapping
But when Hype starves up...
His hunger was stuck wit an empty Belly and bad acting (http://www.rottentomatoes.com/m/belly/)
You aint Nox no more, just a puzzy theman's smashing
So we can call you Miss Nox, this shyt is way past games
Peep as i trash lames & bash wit fast flames
Haunt Nox eternally...
He'll see me every day & pay for it cuz his kids have my last name
I get bills dude, so you can fight as I pill' two
Survive the Times on ya own like Nas.... or ya wife when I kill you

Nox -

http://forums.sohh.com/showthread.php?t=926760
first of all i want people to read razz's verse against me.. alright? now look..



You stutter in sprees, look like Nick Carter's ugliest neice
Rap poser but in real life he's like, 'N'Sync reunion would be sumtin to see'
You aint touchin this heat, to see it dont need a fukkin degree
Get bludgeoned wit ease, call a medical assistance as ya life slips
Should be easy since ya doctor ya flow, as in Razzia writes it


fvck your rules kid, because frankly i just dont give a shlt
look at my battle w/ razz, now was your neice line a coincidence???
you concept-flippin-BlTCH! n'sync again?! thats rediculous!!!
fvck punches, when i flip the script..
you make the cut team, im throwin scissor kicks!!
the way im clownin this punk, well, you might-think-im-jokin
but you aint helpin, this site-aint-been-dope-since, timevirus-posted!
you got textbook structure.. [A short set up line....
Now insert the extended rhyme with waay too many syllables everytime..... but ummmm in text its fine] !!
you cant drop a flow! your f@ggot ass cant rock a show!
be honest bro, you aint wannit with noxy, NOOOOOOO!
i put my fvckin foot in your ass, so now you've got some sole
but if we asked for audio you'd probly switch to rock and roll!!
i fed ya girl my sloppy joe, now im knockin this bltch unconsious
0.80?? must just be the RATIO of ya WINS to LOSSES!
this kids a saugage saddlin' f@ggot, i leave ya whole hood shook
when i SERVE 'THE MAN', cuz my notepad's the ANARCHIST COOKBOOK!!
and i got recipes for disaster, i'll leave you dead in ya tracks
so let the VERSES DO THE TALKING, your's will CONFESS THAT ITS WACK!
so tell me this jack, why you bother messin-with-veterans?!?
when every-bit of text-you-did has never-been remembered-kid!!
learn to flow!.. you really think that its your time to shine?
ya ego just so big, its easy for ya pride to hide behind!!
and i hate authority, im tellin dead-beat cops to suck a dlck!
so ima STICK IT TO THE MAN, and really FVCK THE GOVERNMENT!!
im havin fun with this, i'd love to stay and flow with you dude
but c'mon.. the Eugene Levy of sohh? haha what? you old as him too??!
you know its the truth.. but im tired of stompin you son
no well wishes.. other than to see you at the bottom of one! biaaatch!!

theman080
11-07-07, 11:46 AM
swaying votes

obnoxious
11-07-07, 05:01 PM
lol couldnt your lil comment be considered "VOTE SWAYING"?? lol
just let it play out..

Neo Regular
11-07-07, 06:24 PM
tie.
rhyme again.

W.I.Z.E.
11-09-07, 07:18 AM
tie.
rhyme again.


Agreed. TheMan had some fire lines here


"He's the blatant inspiration for this fake, a herb's failin it
Either he's Raz's aborted fetus, or AvK's worst alias
I'm leadin by wide margins, your in turn tralin it
As smooth as smooth sailing is, so proper wit tunes"

But then some others that were just filler. Overall I thought it was cool, the Vet lines are seriously gettin' old. It's not a different angle, and lol. Nox isn't really that old.


As for Nox's verse

I didn't like the beginning. Flipping a cats verse early on when it was stated NOT to is just weak to me. But these lines just hit.

the way im clownin this punk, well, you might-think-im-jokin
but you aint helpin, this site-aint-been-dope-since, timevirus-posted!
......
so tell me this jack, why you bother messin-with-veterans?!?
when every-bit of text-you-did has never-been remembered-kid!!
learn to flow!.. you really think that its your time to shine?
ya ego just so big, its easy for ya pride to hide behind!!



That "typical..." line is SOOOOOO played so you lost points for that.

Overall, I agree w/ Neo it's a tie. IF...and I mean IF I had to vote I'd give the slight edge to Nox. His tone was really one some f... you I don't respect you isht and that works in a battle. Plus of course he had some content as stated above.

obnoxious
11-09-07, 09:58 AM
fvck all that tie bullshlt.. decide ahaha


and wize, what do you mean IF you had to vote?? i thought thats how battles were decided upon here.. by votes. and IF you had to vote, then was that your vote? holler back nox is confuused lol

dieMCs
11-10-07, 02:42 AM
theman080 -
I'm set scopin you, Alonzo Mourning, no Net(s) hope for you
MOVE THE KEYS... out ya house and stop texting
Ya lifestory is pathetic, could be told wit animated smiley's
Should be easy since ya doctor ya flow, as in Razzia writes it
Either he's Raz's aborted fetus, or AvK's worst alias
i'll drop this bafoon, filled wit hot air, pop the balloon
He'll see me every day & pay for it cuz his kids have my last name

Nox -
i put my fvckin foot in your ass, so now you've got some sole
i fed ya girl my sloppy joe, now im knockin this bltch unconsious
0.80?? must just be the RATIO of ya WINS to LOSSES!
when i SERVE 'THE MAN', cuz my notepad's the ANARCHIST COOKBOOK!!
so let the VERSES DO THE TALKING, your's will CONFESS THAT ITS WACK!
ya ego just so big, its easy for ya pride to hide behind!!
so ima STICK IT TO THE MAN, and really FVCK THE GOVERNMENT!!
no well wishes.. other than to see you at the bottom of one! biaaatch!!

i was gonna go with number of lines i liked but they're tied so i'ma just judge!!! out of the content i liked i'm gonna give the edge decision to nox's b!tch ass!!!! he hit harder, had better direct hits @ was slightly slicker!!! the beginning was wack but he heated up later on!!!

oh wait i had a line on ther that was supposed to be deleted, leavin' it 7-8, still gay ass nox!!!!

:mad:here victim, victim!!!:mad: