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theman080
11-04-07, 04:13 PM
I drained the goblet with one gulp, persuasion was done
Zeus begging like a scoundrel for reclaiming his son
War was on the horizon, glittered bright at the dawn
Delighted these pawns finally see the righteous & strong
Politely and calm, I remained when discussing the plan
But in private my tyrant climate was too much to withstand
My screams peirced the skyline in deeply potent strands
Sendin chill through mortals, like I bled on Trojan sand
Corner the invading Titans and drown em, when I invite the river
So precise the fissure, no survival, just be dying quicker
With the same lust present that made Aphrodite shiver
Yes, yes... I will make sure Mount Olympus is intact
But there's a few more on the list, another case to crack
Lets face the facts, I could make thousands easily fry
But my only concern is making sure Athena will die
Heat gets applied, massive masochist, eating her eyes
While she screams indeed as I'm deeply inside
Just imagine me ruling Olympus, bet it haunts the sight
Rule with awesome strikes, I, who spawned the Spartans might
Should never cross me twice, believe Athena will learn
But first the Titans must be slain, seein each of em burn
Some how Cronos returned, a pity he had to be aborted for a payoff
He had the proper state of mind, but he was thwarted by betrayal
He had swallowed each of the gods under intuition's aid
Quickly they been slain, his own children, quickly blamed em crazed
But somehow Zeus managed survival as the craftiest rival
And with Rhea's help developed a potion for snatchin the title
And after a while Cronos gulped it and through up the Gods
Who returned with a vengeance for the youth he had robbed
War ensued, the Gods might left Cronos dethroned & imprisoned
Alone in his sickness, while Zeus' reign in holy conditions
But in only a minute, war would once again arise
And history would rewrite its type, & Ares gets the prize
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A whole lotta dyin man, my diagram assures it
Forfeit the final plan that Zues wants to war with
No coin flip, its certain to spread violence I was born with
Scorned quick like Thorn's tips thats crownin the christ
Black blood vessels trembling is the sound of the night
Assembling, defeaning army but my bounty was twice
Thought I forfeit my servants to let my talents suffice
But rolling solo is simply idiotic so to balance the plight
I founded the type, of brutal soldiers prone to foulest of fights
Allowin my might, to infiltrate before the dawn initiates
Keep them free of the Titan battle that the Gods officiate
And stipulate a surpise attack with wrath while foes insidiate
In fact as I watch now, through a miraculous view
Zeus shatters a few, smackin dudes with fabulous moves
Athena's graspin Cronos, see her snap em in two
Zeus sports a sinister grin that I happen to use
He sports a triumphant pose while the sun reaches its peak
But then spots a sudden growth as we're leaving the trees
Athena it seems, is fiendin' just to bleed me indeed
An encore to the death of Cronos, her features are steamed
My battallion of thousands storm the field so gallant
The deaths amountin...
I murder carelessly while the ***** approaches
Slit her throat quick! My blood tingles as I focus
I mingle in a motion, see her garment, itchin just to soak it
Visibly shes slowin....threw her off by a fragment of a second
She stabs me in the method that would have slain before
I'm aimin of coarse, to maim this whore, the rape her with force
An ensure my lineage of power, keep the flame on the torch
On this stage of a sort, I grip her throat and snap the bones in her arm
Look to the side, my army's rollin got the foes in they palm
****!!!
Steal in my chest, concealed weaponry revealed in a sec
Its pealin my flesh, a scream rips, all my soldiers lean quick
Seeing their master cower as pain;s disaster showers
She grimaces as she finishes the thrust to my chest
She's lustin for death, but **** this *****, she'll be done in a sec
As my blood spills I feel my strength follow from my frame
Just another second of choking and she'll follow to the grave
Damn this whore, her eyes see the afterlife but I cant be sure
My fingers slip an inch, she slumps on the trunk of the tree
The battle rages on, truly somethin to see, to much to believe
I try to see if she draws breath, she's no DaVinci now
I examine my own wounds, too much for livin now
I scream for my soldiers to exposer her, bleed some more
After death to blast her flesh, cuz defeat is assured
The throne of Olypus altered with Ares as the author
Athena, I was to the one to chalker...
But its really trouble breathin some more...

Cali_Bud
11-04-07, 05:28 PM
*Erases "Greek Mythology" piece*..:dry:. Very nice drop 080 I liked this 1 and I'm very interested in greek mythology so the fact that you added that in can only help.

Sicilian Spit
11-05-07, 01:45 AM
Interesting topic. Very talented writing.

Ecliptik
11-05-07, 01:49 PM
i coulda swore i did a peice called "god of war"...:confused:

different approach though....very enjoyable....good ****....

theman080
11-06-07, 03:03 PM
good look @ all the feed

Universe
11-10-07, 12:52 PM
I drained the goblet with one gulp, persuasion was done
Zeus begging like a scoundrel for reclaiming his son
War was on the horizon, glittered bright at the dawn
Delighted these pawns finally see the righteous & strong
Politely and calm, I remained when discussing the plan
But in private my tyrant climate was too much to withstand
My screams peirced the skyline in deeply potent strands
Sendin chill through mortals, like I bled on Trojan sand

A whole lotta dyin man, my diagram assures it
Forfeit the final plan that Zues wants to war with
No coin flip, its certain to spread violence I was born with
Scorned quick like Thorn's tips thats crownin the christ
Black blood vessels trembling is the sound of the night
Assembling, defeaning army but my bounty was twice
Thought I forfeit my servants to let my talents suffice

:thumbsup: Very nice. If your entire piece had this rhythm and flow, it would've been epic.

theman080
11-10-07, 02:17 PM
good look Universe

W.I.Z.E.
11-11-07, 07:27 PM
I'm coming back for this...from what I read this is solid...

theman080
11-29-07, 12:06 AM
I'm coming back for this...from what I read this is solid...

werd??????????????

MaCRonI
11-29-07, 10:06 PM
i aint got the time to feed right now....but this definately deserves a look over...seems like a solid drop to me...top scoring if i do say so myself! :yes:

Mukel
12-01-07, 12:12 PM
cool, solid drop as usual

-DX-
12-01-07, 03:30 PM
Nice work man. You are definitely talented. Read my drop in OPEN Mic if u can.

Boxtones
12-02-07, 02:40 AM
alot of it don't make any sense

just a bunch of cool sounding lines garbled together

theman080
12-02-07, 03:44 PM
It makes sense, you just may not know what I'm talkin about at some points, i.e. Cronos' history and all of that other Greek and Titans ****....wikipedia can help you....and if that doesn't lean your head back and look up with binoculars and that little, tiny, line of text you spor is this going over your head.....

UP!

MaCRonI
12-03-07, 11:41 AM
i gotta say my dude...u definately shownin some growth with this...i slept on u i admit...but this joint truly shones in its mere saturation of facts as well as ur overall flow and multis....the vocab was pretty stellar too! nice work....hope to possibly collab sometime!

9/10

theman080
12-04-07, 02:55 PM
Good look Mac, this is one of the few peices I actually took a while to work on as a whole. Usually I just pick a random dark subject and rhyme-scheme/flow the **** out of it....