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slave2aplaya
11-03-07, 05:07 PM
Less is more
and I'm more or less sure
I don't even know
what we're fighting for
...see...
your allure
is undeniable
which somehow makes your words
more justifiable
you project what I percieve
show me your fearless
and I believe...by far
you're the Mr. Invincible
you convince us all
you are
even so
deep down I know
you still want
you still need
you still hurt
you still bleed
baby...its a shame
I know that same smile was feigned by me
I smiled my smile dishonestly
yes you can place your blame freely
coz as hard as I strained to see
I wasnt sure if the pain would fade
so I invade your kingdom
convince myself Im breaking in
to impart some wisdom
so we can work through the lies
but
I apologise
it was never my place to preach
to you about 'forever'
I was only trying to teach you
that we could learn together

*G*


[Needs work]

homeyjay
11-05-07, 11:00 AM
Less is more
and I'm more or less sure
I don't even know
what we're fighting for
...see...
your allure
is undeniable
which somehow makes your words
more justifiable
you project what I percieve
show me your fearless
and I believe...by far
you're the Mr. Invincible
you convince us all
you are
even so
deep down I know
you still want
you still need
you still hurt
you still bleed
baby...its a shame
I know that same smile was feigned by me
I smiled my smile dishonestly
yes you can place your blame freely
coz as hard as I strained to see
I wasnt sure if the pain would fade
so I invade your kingdom
convince myself Im breaking in
to impart some wisdom
so we can work through the lies
but
I apologise
it was never my place to preach
to you about 'forever'
I was only trying to teach you
that we could learn together
*G*
[Needs work]
For a Sister to not have been on da set for a minute.
You sure "hit the ground running" that's what makes this set so great,
everyone has their own style and one can identify with what they feel.
I have always appreciated your work STP and way to show the love,
You went above and beyond. You know that I,m deffinitely feelin' da flow as well as the story line, way to rhyme with a purpose in mind, not for the sake of one. Big ups to Ya' way to come back wit a boom!! as far as needs work,
well it's just fine the way it is to me, goodin' hj

Nadira...Rare
11-07-07, 06:03 AM
I agree wit hj its fine the way it is... felt

slave2aplaya
11-14-07, 02:06 PM
Thank u guys...much appreciated.

I miss this!

x