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arkaneinc
11-01-07, 10:48 AM
My life is kinda like a manuscript
If I offered you a han' you'd skip
Life's full of trials and tribulations
Lots of denials and sexual relations
Where do I start? What should be my part?
It tears me apart Do I have a heart?

Used to have endless inspiration now with what I'm facin
My Life's like a game on ****in’ Playstation
No controls but my buttons are always being pushed
Tried to hold my breath but my lungs are cushed.

Display my mental through a pencil
My exterior is as flimsy as tensil
Some want to know about my emotion
but that’s got more waves then the ocean
Its funny cuz if I didn't know it
I would think I wasn't Tha Thug Poet*

I've been through more **** than you can relate to
If you hear me say something about u it's not because I hate you
I've got a fate too an expiration date? I got that too
I even know that these expressions have escaped you.

See my life had an alpha and its had an omega
Flows kinda choppy and sloppy but bear with me I beg ya
When I was born my heart was torn insignificant like a piece of corn
15 years later I was scorn, heart was reborn, my head was horned
Went from a seed to the Devil indeed
Last one left Like poets are a dying breed
The lyrics that I recite I didn’t write
Is it right? 2night, I'll tell you about my sight
See I see things differently maybe more simply
It's beautiful as if I was conducting a symphony
If you were to look at me I'm the one pulling the strings uninterrupted
Easy to see my hearts corrupted probably couldn't tell since it erupted.

I’m dead inside just along for the ride
Swallowed my pride just roll with the tide
All that aside I still remember when I died
No one cried but a shot at a legacy? I tried

My inspiration was killed for profit I couldn't stop it
I thought I was a street *****h kinda like a ghetto prophet
Got two kids make me a proud dad and I'm happy for it
I adore it my goal? Homie I already scored it.

Most people are wondering why this skips around from place to place
guess you would understand more if I explained it face to face
My life’s a little combination of so many
It makes perfect sense with a chaser and some Henny
Life’s not predictable it changes gears like a faulty transmission
Always leaves you wishin’ that you knew what was the mission
Mine is complex yet it’s kind of simple too
My life doesn’t make sense to me does it make sense to you?

*= Tha Thug Poet is my name on another forum

homeyjay
11-02-07, 10:58 AM
My life is kinda like a manuscript
If I offered you a han' you'd skip
Life's full of trials and tribulations
Lots of denials and sexual relations
Where do I start? What should be my part?
It tears me apart Do I have a heart?
Used to have endless inspiration now with what I'm facin
My Life's like a game on ****in’ Playstation
No controls but my buttons are always being pushed
Tried to hold my breath but my lungs are cushed.
Display my mental through a pencil
My exterior is as flimsy as tensil
Some want to know about my emotion
but that’s got more waves then the ocean
Its funny cuz if I didn't know it
I would think I wasn't Tha Thug Poet*
I've been through more **** than you can relate to
If you hear me say something about u it's not because I hate you
I've got a fate too an expiration date? I got that too
I even know that these expressions have escaped you.
See my life had an alpha and its had an omega
Flows kinda choppy and sloppy but bear with me I beg ya
When I was born my heart was torn insignificant like a piece of corn
15 years later I was scorn, heart was reborn, my head was horned
Went from a seed to the Devil indeed
Last one left Like poets are a dying breed
The lyrics that I recite I didn’t write
Is it right? 2night, I'll tell you about my sight
See I see things differently maybe more simply
It's beautiful as if I was conducting a symphony
If you were to look at me I'm the one pulling the strings uninterrupted
Easy to see my hearts corrupted probably couldn't tell since it erupted.
I’m dead inside just along for the ride
Swallowed my pride just roll with the tide
All that aside I still remember when I died
No one cried but a shot at a legacy? I tried
My inspiration was killed for profit I couldn't stop it
I thought I was a street *****h kinda like a ghetto prophet
Got two kids make me a proud dad and I'm happy for it
I adore it my goal? Homie I already scored it.
Most people are wondering why this skips around from place to place
guess you would understand more if I explained it face to face
My life’s a little combination of so many
It makes perfect sense with a chaser and some Henny
Life’s not predictable it changes gears like a faulty transmission
Always leaves you wishin’ that you knew what was the mission
Mine is complex yet it’s kind of simple too
My life doesn’t make sense to me does it make sense to you?
*= Tha Thug Poet is my name on another forum
Ayo, like the rhyme scheme of this one. Nice flow too, this piece could have easily fit on the Open Mic Forum also. Reminds me of me (if that makes sense) when I first hit the set. I was kinda going to and fro and finally settled on the P.C.. I still spit but more on a personable level if you will. Looking for your next drop to check how your skill set evolves. Not that this piece is bad or anything, it's just that when we set a standard, we then try to raise the bar again and again. Thanks for the show of love too, there's far to many lead singers on this stage who refuse to sing back up. keep on keepin' on... goodin'

arkaneinc
11-03-07, 01:49 AM
Lol. I knwo what you mean. Thanks for the coment it means alot when someone appreciates your work. As soon as I write some more I'll drop it. Thanks again

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sexydeltagirl
11-06-07, 06:46 PM
I can dig it! that's why I love this place cause folks come and drop work that really makes you think about your life and al the roadblocks that got you to where you are. I would love to hear you spit this open mic style - the passion and energy that would come from you talking about what you have been through would be something special..

Thanks for dropping and keep em coming....

arkaneinc
11-07-07, 02:40 AM
I can dig it! that's why I love this place cause folks come and drop work that really makes you think about your life and al the roadblocks that got you to where you are. I would love to hear you spit this open mic style - the passion and energy that would come from you talking about what you have been through would be something special..
Thanks for dropping and keep em coming....

Thank you. When I get a chance I will get around to recording it. I haven't had much time as of late. Also I have to find a beat that it would go to. If I can't find a beat then I'll just wing it.

I do appreciate your feedback and will be dropping some new stuff from time to time