Redrum (The Hitman)

[Cali_Bud]

The blood and brains pour back in his wound..
A bullet re-enters the chamber and the smoke clears soon..
The tears run back in his eyes as they dry..
Before I wonder how it feels to know that you’re about to die..
He lays down confused wondering what I’m gonna do..
I shout “!!!floor the on down get better you”..
The L jumps from under my shoe back in my hands..
Then to my lips, right before I shout my commands..
He stops his crying and pleading…
Goes back to enjoying the book he was reading..
The door sits back on its hinges like it was repaired..
Made sure it’s the right place with a cold, hard stare..
I backwards trot as I thought “dead is ***** this”..
Through a building that smelled from dirty hallway piss..
I walk back down the stairs and got a breath of fresh air..
As I mentally prepare to sin he’s totally unaware..
I get in the car take off the gloves and spark a fire..
Then peel off in reverse as burnt rubber becomes one with the tires..
Rolling through the ave chicks yelling “ilac” as I pass..
Back at the crib at last and not a minute too fast..
I opened the door, sat on the couch and picked the phone up..
Spit the drink I was sipping back in the cup..
I hear “that handle you can head FAM’s_ILL for G’s 3”..
My phone rings as I watch T.V…

[Ecliptik]

this is fuccin sik....loved the fliped lines....

"that handle you can head FAM’s_ILL for G’s 3”..

^if only that were true...lmao

The blood and brains pour back in his wound..
A bullet re-enters the chamber and the smoke clears soon..
The tears run back in his eyes as they dry..
Before I wonder how it feels to know that you’re about to die..
He lays down confused wondering what I’m gonna do..
I shout “!!!floor the on down get better you”..

^intro was raw....and then flipped a 180 on that last line to set a theme....i had to read that **** 3 times to finally get it...lol

[Sicilian Spit]

This was cool although the concept is all Nas, but you did a good rendition. That spit the drink back in the cup line was straight off of Nas' "Rewind." This was coo though, definitely not the easiest **** to pull off.

[#1rapper]

yeah doin a piece like this takes skill, obviously nas did this with rewind, but this was still fresh, the ill fam line was fire

[Cali_Bud]

I appreciate the feed guys. I guess this was already done by the Nas although I didn't remember that he had already done this until I had got to the middle of the piece. I'm a concept rapper so I'm always thinking of new concepts.