Freeverse

[Neo Regular]

I’m Espi, fresh as a finish line tee
That crease solidifies me
I bank on bread it’s a free throw off
Of ya head
Abstract doesn’t define ya thoughts
Spreading from lead
All day I get my grind on and pray to
Jah doin my thing
Cops be watching me I got my fourth
Ticket in a year
These queers, they don’t wanna leave
Me alone
Until I jumpstart the chrome and get
It rollin them stones
Well dem bullets be as hard as a stone,
That’s why I said it’s a rock, pay attention
I’m getting my phone…
Okay, a message, Espi the repetitive rhyme
Stresser stressed lesser when subtle gestures
Keep a ***** together
When I was young I would cry all the time
Til my face felt numb
So yeah I’m still a good guy, but I BUST my gun…

[Sicilian Spit]

I don't get your style. It just doesn't rhyme half the time. Every drop is the same, some ok lines, but mostly some repetitive sh*t that don't rhyme.

[Neo Regular]

you wouldn't know what hip-hop was with a rubber pelvis.
mutha****as is gully with a swag like elvis?
here's the gist, you and ya mama aint ****
you the type to suck d*ck and pay the witness to not say ****
you an athiest, cause this god flow is so vivid it hurts you
you'll never be a rapper man my ****'s universal
okay, let's break down the way of the rhyme
the way kay slay says drama in half of his lines
the way kanye says lui vutton and his moms
i dont rhyme half of the time? it's cause i'm still tryna
break **** down
and if you missed the rhyme in them three times you'll
never get signed
me not being sick? ****, I'm a head of my time
call me tupac, scarface or something that rhymes
with A HEAD of MY TIME...slow...lurner
hit ya quicker than *****s buckin a black burner
you was the type that shook the hands of the victims of Nat Turner!
you in love with my d*ck size, right?
okay i sent ya mom a jpeg, but that only onetime, right?
mutha****as hatin cause they can't even get any shock
like :blink::yes: or :ohmy: (:blush:) [don't figure it out!]
homie you would never say it in public, you'd keep it inside
like ya dirty habits with downlow ***gots in rawhide
saddling up on grown men who tear up ya raw hide
raw?!! HIDE!!!!!!! you was the only one who gave it a try!
now you can sit there with ya lies about thunda coming from
ya throat
that's a muthafukkin homo joke...:king:

[Sicilian Spit]

You realize you just proved my point. And putting smiley faces in ur flow is the gayest **** ever. But don't worry, I'll murder you when I get a chance to sit down and right for 5 or 10 minutes.

[Sicilian Spit]

Smooth the label? I bet smooth a fable
Should did yourself as a baby wit a noose in ya cradle
I'm pluggin you like cable till you woozy and unstable
Then get Biblical and murder you like Cain was doin Abel
Neo Regular, please I'm beggin ya
Stop postin whack sh*t, ya rhyme scheme's irregular
Or rather nonexistant, now your weezin, shaken up
You'd think its the Dark Ages, I'm so sick I'm plaguin ya
Sweep the f*ckin stage wit ya and call it a night
Don't fight it, accept dyin and just follow the light
Spittin cold lines I'll ice you like Paul Wall when he bite
Might be signed but you'll never make a quality byte
Stop callin me, aight? Already told you I'm not gay
Look at Neo's raps, perfect lesson of what to not say
On ya knees - drop, pray that I don't leave ya block sprayed
This my HOUSE PARTY b*tch - KID you just got PLAYed

[Sicilian Spit]

Uppin because Neo the Zero needs to peep it.

[#1rapper]

you wouldn't know what hip-hop was with a rubber pelvis.
mutha****as is gully with a swag like elvis?
kinda wack...
here's the gist, you and ya mama aint ****
you the type to suck d*ck and pay the witness to not say ****
haha..thats funny.haha
you an athiest, cause this god flow is so vivid it hurts you
you'll never be a rapper man my ****'s universal
filler
okay, let's break down the way of the rhyme
the way kay slay says drama in half of his lines
the way kanye says lui vutton and his moms
i dont rhyme half of the time? it's cause i'm still tryna
break **** down
and if you missed the rhyme in them three times you'll
never get signed
alright...i like that part cuz it was uniue to this battle, it was solid
me not being sick? ****, I'm a head of my time
call me tupac, scarface or something that rhymes
coo..
with A HEAD of MY TIME...slow...lurner
hit ya quicker than *****s buckin a black burner
you was the type that shook the hands of the victims of Nat Turner!
ehhh
you in love with my d*ck size, right?
okay i sent ya mom a jpeg, but that only onetime, right?
so-so
mutha****as hatin cause they can't even get any shock
like or () [don't figure it out!]
musta went over my head...
homie you would never say it in public, you'd keep it inside
like ya dirty habits with downlow ***gots in rawhide
saddling up on grown men who tear up ya raw hide
raw?!! HIDE!!!!!!! you was the only one who gave it a try!
wordplay was cool
now you can sit there with ya lies about thunda coming from
ya throat
that's a muthafukkin homo joke...
decent ending

Smooth the label? I bet smooth a fable
Should did yourself as a baby wit a noose in ya cradle
pretyy good...
I'm pluggin you like cable till you woozy and unstable
Then get Biblical and murder you like Cain was doin Abel
Decent
Neo Regular, please I'm beggin ya
Stop postin whack sh*t, ya rhyme scheme's irregular
ehh
Or rather nonexistant, now your weezin, shaken up
You'd think its the Dark Ages, I'm so sick I'm plaguin ya
coulda cut that one out imo
Sweep the f*ckin stage wit ya and call it a night
Don't fight it, accept dyin and just follow the light
so-so
Spittin cold lines I'll ice you like Paul Wall when he bite
Might be signed but you'll never make a quality byte
wordplay..pretty good..been done before
Stop callin me, aight? Already told you I'm not gay
Look at Neo's raps, perfect lesson of what to not say
good trashtalking
On ya knees - drop, pray that I don't leave ya block sprayed
This my HOUSE PARTY b*tch - KID you just got PLAYed
done to death..but still overall a pretty good ending


alrights so overall this was a close battle, and imo it was a tough call, but ima have to go with sicilian spit..no disresepct to neo regular cuz he did his thing..that verse could easily knock out half of sohh..just so happens sicilian spit isin't a scrub..but yeah props on mannin up and battilin..

[Neo Regular]

maaaaaaaaaan....you are gurbuge

Look man,
Don't diss my squad ya ***** ass aint hard
that won't be the first time a white rapper pulled a race card
Me shoulda been lynched at birth? well you OWE ME CASH
and dem 40 acres that you stashed in the back
And see I gotta close the gap before the sh*t get bad
"I woulda been ya dad but your mom was not suckin my d*ck!"
The gun'll have ya *****-a*s backflippin in sh*t
like you was Steve-O, Bam or Johnny Knoxville, prick!
I'll do a SUICIDE TRICK but it wont be LYNCHIN
it's me stepping out a suicide door with a chicken
In invisible Gucci draws and she's working her pivot
I bang HAMMERS like a PISSED OFF HOMER SIMPSON
you just dead weight slowing up the speed of this rat race
And I DONT want ya mom, we can't stand the sight
of her fat face
I'm sorry, I will admit my ass did come on her fat face...
think...his ass came on her face?
you prolly on her P-C talking all gangsta with a desktop gerbil
in a cage name Franklin
look, DUCK when my boys SHOOT GAUGES, fam
I mean my homies oughta be in locked cages, maaaaaan...
Friends big up they friends and they get put in good places
Well I BURN A BRIDGE TO SEE WHERE MY TALENT WILL TAKE THIS.
Oh I see you Sicilian right? Me neither
the only way you ROLLIN IN THE DOUGH is when you BAKIN MY PIZZA
You cracka with a fukked up tan
I got a backhand that slaps the pigment out of ya tan
I bet you rock ya straight hair like an afro, huh?
You prolly had cornrows before, huh? Your mama's a whore
on all fours on dirty floors in porno stores taking pictures with
keg abusers from a dormitory floor--

I got a show tomorrow, you should come...

***.

Internet rapper.

You racist-ass B*TCH.

[Neo Regular]

you wouldn't know what hip-hop was with a rubber pelvis.
mutha****as is gully with a swag like elvis?
kinda wack...
here's the gist, you and ya mama aint ****
you the type to suck d*ck and pay the witness to not say ****
haha..thats funny.haha
you an athiest, cause this god flow is so vivid it hurts you
you'll never be a rapper man my ****'s universal
filler
okay, let's break down the way of the rhyme
the way kay slay says drama in half of his lines
the way kanye says lui vutton and his moms
i dont rhyme half of the time? it's cause i'm still tryna
break **** down
and if you missed the rhyme in them three times you'll
never get signed
alright...i like that part cuz it was uniue to this battle, it was solid
me not being sick? ****, I'm a head of my time
call me tupac, scarface or something that rhymes
coo..
with A HEAD of MY TIME...slow...lurner
hit ya quicker than *****s buckin a black burner
you was the type that shook the hands of the victims of Nat Turner!
ehhh
you in love with my d*ck size, right?
okay i sent ya mom a jpeg, but that only onetime, right?
so-so
mutha****as hatin cause they can't even get any shock
like or () [don't figure it out!]
musta went over my head...
homie you would never say it in public, you'd keep it inside
like ya dirty habits with downlow ***gots in rawhide
saddling up on grown men who tear up ya raw hide
raw?!! HIDE!!!!!!! you was the only one who gave it a try!
wordplay was cool
now you can sit there with ya lies about thunda coming from
ya throat
that's a muthafukkin homo joke...
decent ending
Smooth the label? I bet smooth a fable
Should did yourself as a baby wit a noose in ya cradle
pretyy good...
I'm pluggin you like cable till you woozy and unstable
Then get Biblical and murder you like Cain was doin Abel
Decent
Neo Regular, please I'm beggin ya
Stop postin whack sh*t, ya rhyme scheme's irregular
ehh
Or rather nonexistant, now your weezin, shaken up
You'd think its the Dark Ages, I'm so sick I'm plaguin ya
coulda cut that one out imo
Sweep the f*ckin stage wit ya and call it a night
Don't fight it, accept dyin and just follow the light
so-so
Spittin cold lines I'll ice you like Paul Wall when he bite
Might be signed but you'll never make a quality byte
wordplay..pretty good..been done before
Stop callin me, aight? Already told you I'm not gay
Look at Neo's raps, perfect lesson of what to not say
good trashtalking
On ya knees - drop, pray that I don't leave ya block sprayed
This my HOUSE PARTY b*tch - KID you just got PLAYed
done to death..but still overall a pretty good ending
alrights so overall this was a close battle, and imo it was a tough call, but ima have to go with sicilian spit..no disresepct to neo regular cuz he did his thing..that verse could easily knock out half of sohh..just so happens sicilian spit isin't a scrub..but yeah props on mannin up and battilin..


but based on what you saying it looks like I won my n*gga.
i read his sh*t and even said to myself "you (him) lose."

[Neo Regular]

you wouldn't know what hip-hop was with a rubber pelvis.
mutha****as is gully with a swag like elvis?
kinda wack...
here's the gist, you and ya mama aint ****
you the type to suck d*ck and pay the witness to not say ****
haha..thats funny.haha
you an athiest, cause this god flow is so vivid it hurts you
you'll never be a rapper man my ****'s universal
filler
okay, let's break down the way of the rhyme
the way kay slay says drama in half of his lines
the way kanye says lui vutton and his moms
i dont rhyme half of the time? it's cause i'm still tryna
break **** down
and if you missed the rhyme in them three times you'll
never get signed
alright...i like that part cuz it was uniue to this battle, it was solid
me not being sick? ****, I'm a head of my time
call me tupac, scarface or something that rhymes
coo..
with A HEAD of MY TIME...slow...lurner
hit ya quicker than *****s buckin a black burner
you was the type that shook the hands of the victims of Nat Turner!
ehhh
you in love with my d*ck size, right?
okay i sent ya mom a jpeg, but that only onetime, right?
so-so
mutha****as hatin cause they can't even get any shock
like or () [don't figure it out!]
musta went over my head...
homie you would never say it in public, you'd keep it inside
like ya dirty habits with downlow ***gots in rawhide
saddling up on grown men who tear up ya raw hide
raw?!! HIDE!!!!!!! you was the only one who gave it a try!
wordplay was cool
now you can sit there with ya lies about thunda coming from
ya throat
that's a muthafukkin homo joke...
decent ending
Smooth the label? I bet smooth a fable
Should did yourself as a baby wit a noose in ya cradle
pretyy good...
I'm pluggin you like cable till you woozy and unstable
Then get Biblical and murder you like Cain was doin Abel
Decent
Neo Regular, please I'm beggin ya
Stop postin whack sh*t, ya rhyme scheme's irregular
ehh
Or rather nonexistant, now your weezin, shaken up
You'd think its the Dark Ages, I'm so sick I'm plaguin ya
coulda cut that one out imo
Sweep the f*ckin stage wit ya and call it a night
Don't fight it, accept dyin and just follow the light
so-so
Spittin cold lines I'll ice you like Paul Wall when he bite
Might be signed but you'll never make a quality byte
wordplay..pretty good..been done before
Stop callin me, aight? Already told you I'm not gay
Look at Neo's raps, perfect lesson of what to not say
good trashtalking
On ya knees - drop, pray that I don't leave ya block sprayed
This my HOUSE PARTY b*tch - KID you just got PLAYed
done to death..but still overall a pretty good ending
alrights so overall this was a close battle, and imo it was a tough call, but ima have to go with sicilian spit..no disresepct to neo regular cuz he did his thing..that verse could easily knock out half of sohh..just so happens sicilian spit isin't a scrub..but yeah props on mannin up and battilin..

but based on what you saying it looks like I won my n*gga.
i read his sh*t and even said to myself "you (him) lose."
take into consideration he took two days to write that and I wrote
that verse on the spot.
and I know about SOHH's "Shorter Verse Impact" curve.
that sh*t don't work with me...
you didnt even write a long enough verse.

[Sicilian Spit]

I took a couple days to write cuz I got a busy life homie, I got business to handle, can't just sit down and write raps whenever I feel like it. You all butt hurt, but don't worry I'll come wit bar after bar and beat you again, its NATHAN to a boss.

[Sicilian Spit]

First of all, how am I racist? Second of all, you ain't even talk **** about me for most of the verse, but about my mom. Third, you're still weak even if you're signed. Fourth, your **** still don't rhyme. I mean, what does everyone think, how can this fool possibly beat me in a battle if half his lines dont rhyme and another quarter of them are just rhymin the same words with one another. Check out mine, hella multis, hella rhyme skills, which is the point of rappin neways.

[Neo Regular]

"Should did yourself as a baby wit a noose in ya cradle"

YOU LOST.

And shut the fukk up with all that multi-syllable count/radar equation/match/BULLSH*T. No one cares. IF anything, it makes you sound technical on a mic, like you have no actual talent.

[Sicilian Spit]

"In invisible Gucci draws and she's working her pivot
I bang HAMMERS like a PISSED OFF HOMER SIMPSON"

First of all, thats doesn't rhyme. Second of all, wtf? But anyways, I guess if multi syllabic lines indicate no talent, then Nas, Rakim, Jay-Z, Common, Talib Kweli, all the best lyricists basically, got no talent? Wut is you talkin bout?

[Invisible Vision]

"In invisible Gucci draws and she's working her pivot
I bang HAMMERS like a PISSED OFF HOMER SIMPSON"
First of all, thats doesn't rhyme. Second of all, wtf? But anyways, I guess if multi syllabic lines indicate no talent, then Nas, Rakim, Jay-Z, Common, Talib Kweli, all the best lyricists basically, got no talent? Wut is you talkin bout?


stop my dude.... stop. Don't bring legends into a conversation regarding your own work.... no matter the metaphor... it makes you look bad.

[Sicilian Spit]

Never really battle rapped, but I'll still handle this cat
He's hotter than candle wax cuz I gave him more SH*T THAN A CATTLE RANCH
But like an AVALANCHE I'm finna ICE HIM DOWN
Ya b*tch creamed all over me homie, WIPE ME DOWN
And oh, we talkin bout mamas? Then it's finna be drama
I'll rape yours and then kill her when I empty three llamas
Is Neo mad cuz I just lyrically bombed him?
Or because I f*cked and killed his mom and didn't throw away the condom?
Go right ahead dog, examine the sh*t
And IF THE GLOVE FIT THEN I MUSTA HIT
I'll scorch you like VIETNAMESE WHEN THE MUSTARD HIT
You like a closet f*g the way you lust for d*ck
All that cussin and sh*t won't help ya situation
You dead homie, now I'm bout to mack the b*tch you datin
You mad cuz I spoke the truth and said that you was whack
But your sh*t AINT TIGHT YET so I CAN'T GIVE YOU NO SLACK
Ya lyrics lack punch, my lyrics pack punch
I'll cut u up, put you in a BROWN BAG and make you my SACK LUNCH
And that pizza line, give it a rest man that sh*t is tired
I'll kick your a*s off SOHH like I'm DONALD TRUMP - YOU'RE FIRED
I'm Cosa Nostra, you a snitch b*tch who SINGS LIKE A CHOIR
You got over 3,000 posts, ain't it bout time to retire?
My rhymes are for hire, so if you need a ghostwriter
Make an offer, until then admit that I post tighter
You a flow biter but don't try to bite on mine
Cuz it'll shatter your teeth and skull and rattle ya spine
Your rather behind now, this battle is mine
And if this thread don't get feed then my gat'll decide
I'll find out where you stay dog, I got connections
There, i got your address.... and now I got directions
Like a DOCTOR I'LL GIVE YOU PLENTY SHOTS - INJECTIONS
Still think you hot? Act like a MIRROR man and START REFLECTIN

You had to trash talk at the end of your sh*t but I'll let the 32 speak for itself.

[Sicilian Spit]

Uppin till Neo sees. Maybe I should just put in in a new thread.

[Sicilian Spit]

Oh, and I realize that those dudes are legends Vision. I wasn't using them in reference to my own work, but just in reference to an element of rhyming that I think we should all aspire to. Obviously I'm not on their level. I'm just saying I'm way closer to their level in terms of writing than Neo is.

[Sicilian Spit]

Neo your turn on the versus thread.

[ogacihC]

Sicilian Spit quit dodgin and make that battle thread

[Sicilian Spit]

Done made it already go and peep my drop.

[keylomc3]

But like an AVALANCHE I'm finna ICE HIM DOWN
Ya b*tch creamed all over me homie, WIPE ME DOWN

The whole verse was pretty pathetic. Also, I'm not sure if you're aware or not, but an avalanche involves snow, not ice. Moreover, icing down another man and asking him to wipe you down, even after it involves imaginary sex with his girl, is super homo. I didn't even read Neo's verse, but you lost.

[Invisible Vision]

The whole verse was pretty pathetic. Also, I'm not sure if you're aware or not, but an avalanche involves snow, not ice. Moreover, icing down another man and asking him to wipe you down, even after it involves imaginary sex with his girl, is super homo. I didn't even read Neo's verse, but you lost.


co-sign, feel free to put my vote in for Neo also.

[Sicilian Spit]

Ya'll should read Neo's verse, cuz it is hella weak. Also, check out the verses thread we did, I won by unanimous vote. Either of you two want to battle, start up a verses thread and let's do it

"We could take it to a battle and do it
I ain't a ***** man I don't spit vaginal fluid" - Locksmith

[Neo Regular]

The whole verse was pretty pathetic. Also, I'm not sure if you're aware or not, but an avalanche involves snow, not ice. Moreover, icing down another man and asking him to wipe you down, even after it involves imaginary sex with his girl, is super homo. I didn't even read Neo's verse, but you lost.

that's what I was talking about, man!

like...c'mon pimp!

[Sicilian Spit]

I'm not sure if you're aware, but there is such thing as an ice avalanche. Type in "ice avalanche" to Google and you'll see. Don't doubt my intelligence. Furthermore, I pull more h*es than all three of you combined anyways so I ain't even trippin, keep hatin, do your job.

[escobar06]

The whole verse was pretty pathetic. Also, I'm not sure if you're aware or not, but an avalanche involves snow, not ice. Moreover, icing down another man and asking him to wipe you down, even after it involves imaginary sex with his girl, is super homo. I didn't even read Neo's verse, but you lost.
co-sign, feel free to put my vote in for Neo also.
that's what I was talking about, man!
like...c'mon pimp!

idoits thinking snow dont invole ice :laugh:

[Invisible Vision]

idoits thinking snow dont invole ice :laugh:


listen alias, despite your 6-post-a-month clout... i'mma have to go ahead and say a few things...

1)shut the fukk up, you look silly.

2)the snow/ice/avalanche situation had nothing to do with me no being impressed by his verse.... truthfully i didn't really flinch when i saw that....

3) the reason i didn't flinch is because it was a wack line, in a garbage verse, where he attacked an OM piece as if it was a battle.. which is corny 100 times over.

4)you named yourself after the most doody era in another man's career...

log off, disgust @ this kid calling other people idiots and then spelling "involve" wrong...

[escobar06]

listen alias, despite your 6-post-a-month clout... i'mma have to go ahead and say a few things...
1)shut the fukk up, you look silly.
2)the snow/ice/avalanche situation had nothing to do with me no being impressed by his verse.... truthfully i didn't really flinch when i saw that....
3) the reason i didn't flinch is because it was a wack line, in a garbage verse, where he attacked an OM piece as if it was a battle.. which is corny 100 times over.
4)you named yourself after the most doody era in another man's career...
log off, disgust @ this kid calling other people idiots and then spelling "involve" wrong...


involved fix

fyi for some odd reason escobar is actually my middle name :shrugs:

[keylomc3]

involved fix
fyi for some odd reason escobar is actually my middle name :shrugs:

Even more reason for you to jump off a bridge.

[Sicilian Spit]

Looks like Vision just got played on that Nas sh*t, haha. Anyways, it's all right if ya'll didn't like the verse, but don't hate, give constructive criticism. And by the way, it wasn't a response to a verse, it was a battle. He originally responded to a comment I made about a drop of his with a verse aimed at me so I cam back at him, he came back at me, and then I finally dropped this, so get the facts straight before you start talkin' sh*t. And like I said, you really think I'm that whack, let's do it up in the versus forum.

[Invisible Vision]

Looks like Vision just got played on that Nas sh*t, haha. Anyways, it's all right if ya'll didn't like the verse, but don't hate, give constructive criticism. And by the way, it wasn't a response to a verse, it was a battle. He originally responded to a comment I made about a drop of his with a verse aimed at me so I cam back at him, he came back at me, and then I finally dropped this, so get the facts straight before you start talkin' sh*t. And like I said, you really think I'm that whack, let's do it up in the versus forum.


I don't battle invalids and special-ed students anymore.....


...turns out its bad P.R.

but keep up the good work, billy. reading is hard work!

[Sicilian Spit]

Wow, that would have been pretty f*ckin funny if I was in 3rd grade... Actually, if you really wanna know, I go to UC Berkeley (top public institution in the nation, by the way), so you really think I'm special-ed? And if you really that much better, prove it b*tch! Otherwise, stop talkin sh*t, or keep talkin sh*t so I can keep playin your every word like I have been.