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paranormatic
10-28-07, 04:54 PM
To da untrained eye--dat can’t tell fame from lies,
So many *****z high dey just stain da skies,
Ominous minds…fallin from cloud 9,
Compose a thousand rhymes…lines are da evidence,
Pain resonate in dey eyez …broadcastin live from foreign settlements,
Approachin da threshold of extinction…hearin bag pipe chimes,
She was dikin…I swore I’d wife ha in da next lifetime,
Cuz like mine, like minds signs n astrology,
Aligned constellations…grindin in criminology,
Unlawfully confined to a prism I’m prime,
Seen n Premonitions or either-- n ah vision of mine, leavin my legacy enshrined,
Behind great walls of time, where dreams stream off great falls n climb,
Bound by rhyme n reason da grand design even,
Da Chief Pacifist like baby Jesus Christ teethin,

Sicilian Spit
10-29-07, 06:28 PM
I could f*ck wit it. Not the best, but some good terminology and lines. I think I've seen that "confined to a prism I'm prime" line before too. Last two lines were my favorite.

Cali_Bud
10-31-07, 09:48 AM
Nice drop...started off kinda bland to me then picked it up. This piece seems unfinished to me though..but nevertheless good drop