New Audio/I need a name!!

[Cali_Bud]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/44665580e813a4/

Check this out. This is 1 of my first pieces and I need feedback and suggestions. This is basically a song where I am rapping about the relationship between me and my mic. The name of the song is "The Mic I Touched" The beat was done by kingsmenproductions.

Another thing is...I need a damn name!! I'm not doing Young or Lil anything so neither of those will work lol. Help me out SOHH I need suggestions!!

[theman080]

I cant really give audio pointers because I'm not much of an audio head and dont no the technical shyt about it so that'll have to be saved for WIZE & other heads...

- Breath control seemed ok

- The main problem was your voice, it seemed distorted a bit and at times I couldn;t make out what you were saying.

-Beat was cool

-The flow was underwhelming, but since its one of your first one I dont expect you to be flipping all kinda of classic rhyme schemes, it wasnt bad just average.

-Overall, the voice quality was the only thing that I noticed as a downer to the tracks quality because I couldnt make out the lyrics that well at some points. Serious props on taking the next step with this Cali, more writers in here (including myself) should take that step...hope to hear more shyt

[the puppetmaster]

You sound like you're reading homie, might just be being new to the whole audio end of things. I can tell you're a skilled writer though because of the placement of words within the rhyme, wait till you get a lil more comfortable you'll be a beast in NO time. Your voice is quite tolerable, I never once had the urge to rip out your vocal chords which is great. I liked the story a lot. Try memorizing this and re-recording it. I'm tellin u this is a nice concept.
Could use some overdubs and a cleaner mix. What are you recording on/ with? Programs etc?

As far as a name goes try to think of personality traits that stand out about you or define you, you gotta have some weird quirk about you that you can exaggerate into a stage name


Props to steppin out homie. Nice work!


-P-

[#1rapper]

mad respect for this...can't really point out anything mre then theman and puppetmaster did..but yeah..fresh concept and the beat was pretty good..keep the audios coming

[Advent Verbal Kent]

Not bad. Not bad at all. Audio sounded crisp. A lot of areas that can be improved upon. You should mos def leave that track alone and come back to it using everything you have learned. As for a name. No body can make a name for you except yourself. Everything else is earned.


AvK

[Razzia]

well its a good start. just need some swagger


i see you, btw... "somebody" of rm. it all makes sense now lol

[Cali_Bud]

well its a good start. just need some swagger
i see you, btw... "somebody" of rm. it all makes sense now lol
True story was hot as hell man, we should collab and put something together

[W.I.Z.E.]

I really liked the beat...nice....sure I'd like to use it...send it to me.


Nah...as for the whole song. You'll get a LOT better with more reps in. Everyone already gave the same constructive feedback I would give.

[Che Boogy]

Whats Good. I like the track. At alot of parts (especially in the 2nd verse), it seems that ur reading. Keep on making more songs, that flow will come to you.