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Sicilian Spit
10-23-07, 06:30 PM
Sittin in my new ride, all up in the Town*
Sh*ttin on these rude guys, give 'em dollops of the brown
Hittin on this b*tch Jackie, call her Mrs. Brown
Rippin thru these fake kings, give 'em wallops to the crown
Followin' the sound of my thunderous heartbeat
This slap's underground, you could call it a BART beat +
Want light-skinned b*tches, never f*ckin' wit dark meat
Ya'll dudes ain't pilot lights, ya'll ain't lookin' to spark heat
All Sicilians ain't mobsters, robbers and such
But I'll heat you up like a lobster if you slobber the dutch
Payment ain't an obstacle but I don't offer her much
Give her 2 shiny pennies then I clobber the hutch
Make her walk on a crutch and still tell her to take a hike
Throw bodies in Lake Merrit - jakes, fakes and snakes alike
And I'm nothin like Hitler but lookin to stake my Reich
Finna storm the stage, leave 'em shook up, then take the mic
Stage a strike and melt these lame cats like plastic
My rhymes is flowtastic but times is mo' drastic
You could say I'm bombastic, more like enthusiastic
Scholastic dude preachin church so call me ecclesiastic

*Oakland
+Bay Area's subway

Advent Verbal Kent
10-23-07, 07:13 PM
Not bad...I dont always like simple. But I can appriciate it here.



AvK

theman080
10-24-07, 02:35 PM
Yeah this had a decent flow, seemed like a random mixtape freestyle in between two other tracks, know what I mean. I can fukk with this though, it would probably be dope in audio though...

Sicilian Spit
10-27-07, 03:04 AM
Good look on the feed ya'll. The whole freestyle in between 2 tracks was kinda what i was goin 4.

#1rapper
10-29-07, 06:57 PM
flows is sick..really..otherwise..yeah..it was just good..no negatives except your not sayin much..