Get out more!

[Mukel]

I plan to expand and explore,
man built boats and oars to visit shores,
now we seem happy to stay indoors,
what you do is fine behind closed doors,
what ever happened to the great outdoors?
let it be known, nobodys perfect we all have flaws,
we've evolved from cavemen to shirts and ties,
bathe daily to evade stench, vermin and flies,
told to show emotion, so big men cry,
but who can we trust, when mans told to lie,
shy away from society, grow a beard and go grey,
hunt in the wilderness and be a predator not prey,
nocturnal likes bats, so we sleep in the day,
walk around at night arms stretched out in a daze,
routine like a machine, same thing day in day out,
kinda stresses you, makes you wanna break out,
you cant fake life, you'll get found out,
be patient, but make yourself heard so shout out,
dont be agrophobic, theres a whole world, go out!

[Ecliptik]

good flow....coulda been longer and built more of a story...i suggest even though this is posted....continue it with a hook and 2 more verses....it'll show just how illaborate and skilled your mind can be for stayin on subject for so long and displaying your creativity....

and prolly a title change would help too.....get out more is TOO odvious...read deeper into your own material and bring forth it's meaning....it makes readers curious and actually wanna read....