The Nastiest vs. Imo Reign Round 2

[Imo Reign]

Imo Reign
http://www.myspace.com/imoreign


The Nastiest
http://www.zshare.net/audio/4164763397f5f1/

[DJ TEKNIK]

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[Imo Reign]

The thread has been unlocked, yo Nastiest you ready?

[The Nastiest]

I'll up something tonight whenever I finally get home

[Imo Reign]

Yeah me too, I gotta go to work in a hour.

[Mowgli]

THis **** is becoming unorganized.

[The Nastiest]

Here's my joint:

Sticktothescript - 3.62MB (http://www.zshare.net/audio/4164763397f5f1/)

[Imo Reign]

Sorry I took so long, had to work. I just upped mine, I put a link to yours at the top too.

[Imo Reign]

The player on pure volume kind of sucks, so I moved the same song to my myspace page and switched the link.

[Kelvito]

voted

[Imo Reign]

This battle is a lot closer than the last one.

[Imo Reign]

Any feedback on the track?

[Kelvito]

Imo
I liked it. Had an epic feel to it like something big was coming up. Like to hear it with the bass a little bigger and then really explore your drums and cymbals. Let us hear the whole drum set including the big cymbals and tom toms. Some of your drum rolls were almost there but it was mostly snare.

[The Nastiest]

yeah, I'd also like some feedback if yall got the time

[Kelvito]

Nasti
There should be more variation in the bass and more of of the bass used. The main sound is really elementary and repetitive PLUS it is high pitched which can make it get monotonous. i like the fact that you layered different melodies on top at different points in the song but there should have been more variation, not just many sounds played at different times during the same riff. They also could have been used more as changes or breaks if you split them up more. Very creative though.

[The Nastiest]

preciate that, kelvito

[Kelvito]

No prob,
I'd like to hear it again if you decide to make any changes tho.

[The Nastiest]

I might try to find a bassline for it, since there's really not one in there. I probably won't make any arrangement changes until I get someone to spit on it, then I'll try to tailor it to their verses.

[Imo Reign]

Imo
I liked it. Had an epic feel to it like something big was coming up. Like to hear it with the bass a little bigger and then really explore your drums and cymbals. Let us hear the whole drum set including the big cymbals and tom toms. Some of your drum rolls were almost there but it was mostly snare.


Thanks for the feedback, as for the toms its kind of hard for me to use because I do my mixing using headphones. For some reason the toms end up as low as the kick drum, but I just learned some new tricks a couple nights ago to make my drums fuller, so I plan on added more drums to this track.

[Kelvito]

Bet... and don't forget to repost it whenever you tweak it. I'd like to see people start doing that so we can hear the work in progress as it evolves.