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BreakCanon
10-08-07, 09:02 PM
Hip-hop flow chart, mapquest mission to the limit,
No gimmicky schlock here, just another exhibit,
Museums of Modern art can’t cope with the stress,
The masses of crap add to the mess,
But I digress…

Rap was dead the minute money subverted art,
When a few miscreants tore the game apart like sharks,
Integrity fell victim to greed and all the other vices,
Now artists don’t think twice before chasing the cheese like mice,
It’s a maze; I’m amazed at how shallow the music’s become,
Nothing to do with urban slums, more the characters involved,
Since when is being shot a perquisite to success,
How this came about is anyone’s guess,
It’s a mess.

Here comes Edgewise to leash the dogma limiting the limit,
No room in my five year plan for any deserters or gimmicks,
Limerick philosopher; speaking in the tongues of fallen souls,
Here to break apart the mold and reclaim the game they stole.

The underground is teeming with wannabe Trumps,
Seeking riches secretly, inadvertent Forest Gumps,
Ignorant to the passing fads composing their own trade,
And when anyone objects, they are ostracized as “gay”,
Or a nerd, it’s absurd that knowledge should come second to the dollar,
To be honest such people are not worth the bother,
A bummer, sure, but worse are their trite verses,
Biting off a zombie is a crime worse than murder.

Here comes Edgewise to leash the dogma limiting the limit,
No room in my five year plan for any deserters or gimmicks,
Limerick philosopher; speaking in the tongues of fallen souls,
Here to break apart the mold and reclaim the game they stole.

And then there are the superficial saviors of rap,
Nothing more than false prophets dressed as sheep in drag,
Equivalent to slag once the ore has been processed,
These wolves will divide and conquer,
Then devour what they’ve accomplished,
Promising that they will never sell out to MTV, BET, or VH1,
A blind man could easily see the jokes they have become.

The canon has fired and run out of ammunition,
Fodder has been processed,
And the mission is accomplished,
The last concept standing will have free reign over the populace,
And the music they will sing will be mankind’s monument,
I promise.

BreakCanon
10-18-07, 09:16 PM
Uppercut...

theman080
10-24-07, 02:40 PM
This was really well written man, the flow wasn't exactly top notch or anything but that wasn;t the man focus of the peice.

The wording was legit, your vocbulary is obviously pretty good. I liked some of the analogies and the way you worded the stanzas were dope. This may pass by a few people who are just scanning through this quickly without really reading it just to see what your doing with the rhyme scheme & flow but I'm surprised this didn;t get more feed. Its pretty solid, Ecliptik and Cali usually hit up the good ones.

Dope Shyt

BreakCanon
11-03-07, 04:50 PM
Thanks a lot Man.

Arise.

#1rapper
11-03-07, 05:01 PM
damn this was slept on...the flow was on and the content was fresh..

"Here comes Edgewise to leash the dogma limiting the limit,
No room in my five year plan for any deserters or gimmicks,
Limerick philosopher; speaking in the tongues of fallen souls,
Here to break apart the mold and reclaim the game they stole."

that part was ill, went over the top, props