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W.I.Z.E.
10-06-07, 08:25 PM
Sick as a kid in a bubble nobody could touch me,
Got love from a girl right above tryin’ to rub me (LIAR)
Then she burst my bubble lovely I fell for her hard,
I used to fight for her attention everyday in the yard.
Tammy was cute, nice red ribbons laced her hair,
Seven, but had a 20 yr. old’s sexy stare,
Five blocks walk home straight to Digney Ave,
No cornball **** we carried our own bags.
Used to talk on the phone mostly school related,
Laughed and debated even real cool to play with,
We ducked and hunted and I had no shame
The only kid with Nintendo so I milked the game.
And was still nervous near her sorta like a lame,
And would dream of the day she would be my dame.
But I knew it was over and my heart got dashed,
When she picked a life with Dave when she played MASH

(Yall remember MASH. Mansion, Apartment, Shack, House. Then they’d ask who’d you’d like to live with…she didn’t pick me)


Hook
Before I had my first drink and became a lush
Before I had facial hair that I had to brush,
I had a crush.
No lust…
Way before the rush damn girls used to drive me nuts,
Before I had my first drink and became a lush
Before I had facial hair that I had to brush,
I had a crush…a crush.


Junior High my style was just mediocre
Cute and smart but girls treated me like okra.
No Travolta Camera shy not a fan of Minolta,
It took a while to gain my focus then I finally spoke up.
Cuz once I started talkin’ to girls I was a natural,
I used to make ‘em laugh while others would have em smackin’ em.
I met Keisha by chance at my school dance,
New Edition’s Lost In Love was that jam,
So I gave her a glance then I grabbed her hand,
Tryed to feel on her ass in those Levi pants,
LAST SONG…grabbed my black jean jacket,
Of course I had the nice black jeans to match it,
And when we first kissed man it felt like magic,
My fears disappeared, reappeared less spastic.
She didn’t go to school with me so we chilled,
At White Castle or the Skate Key to go build,
But after a while we drifted apart,
My second crush went away with a piece of my heart.

Hook
Before I had my first drink and became a lush
Before I had facial hair that I had to brush,
I had a crush.
No lust…
Way before the rush damn girls used to drive me nuts,
Before I had my first drink and became a lush
Before I had facial hair that I had to brush,
I had a crush…a crush. I Had a crush..a crush


In High School I really came into my own,
Had some bangin’ ass chicks I had a chance to bone.
Brought a few chicks home and would make them Moan,
Would go deep with some chicks get em in the zone.
I had Jamie, Iesha, Tiffany, Tonya,
Lisa, Tanisha, Melanie and Rhonda,
But there was one girl that I could not have,
Rebecca was perfect but wouldn’t give a chance.
She had nice hair, perfect smile, good tits worth the while,
Nice ass, good legs, volleyball, nice style,
10 percentile, class pres but one catch,
She had a man, LOSER but still attached.
Me and Kev wouild bug off this new group Wu Tang,
But thoughts of Rebecca would remain on my brain.
It was stain my frame drained as I tried to maintain,
That I would never have her so I stayed in my lane.
Till the other day I saw her riding the train,
She looked like ****…nah she actually looked the same.
Married now, two kids, nice gig, hot crib,
But I still wonder what would have happened if…


Hook
Before I had my first drink and became a lush
Before I had facial hair that I had to brush,
I had a crush.
No lust…
Way before the rush damn girls used to drive me nuts,
Before I had my first drink and became a lush
Before I had facial hair that I had to brush,
I had a crush…a crush. I Had a crush..a crush

#1rapper
10-06-07, 08:30 PM
hmm...not really feelin the hook..BUT the verses were solid..alot of shyt ppl can relate to..content was good and original..i liekd how it started off as a kid and developed...

W.I.Z.E.
10-06-07, 08:40 PM
hmm...not really feelin the hook.

y not?

#1rapper
10-06-07, 11:51 PM
y not?

to evaluate...i heard ur audio before..so now wen i read ur drops i cant help but picture u sayin the shyt..and i cant picture u singin this..so yeah..

Ecliptik
10-07-07, 02:32 AM
to evaluate...i heard ur audio before..so now wen i read ur drops i cant help but picture u sayin the shyt..and i cant picture u singin this..so yeah..

*co-sign*

W.I.Z.E.
10-07-07, 07:49 AM
*co-sign*


Fair points.....Lemme try this out on audio....I'll post it tonight and tell me what yall think. It'll be a rough draft.

#1rapper
10-07-07, 09:15 AM
Fair points.....Lemme try this out on audio....I'll post it tonight and tell me what yall think. It'll be a rough draft.

cool

W.I.Z.E.
10-07-07, 10:03 PM
http://www.zshare.net/audio/4080509b0d6011/

#1rapper
10-08-07, 09:31 AM
hmm..strange turn of events..now the hook sounds good..i imagined it sayed diffenently..some lines do seem hurried..i will say that...nothing another session wouldnt fix..but yeah came out better then i expected..props

theman080
10-10-07, 05:43 PM
Second verse was the standout, third was good, I'm not fukkin wit the first one, I get the progression **** just not fukkin with it. This was a decent track though, that second verse was really the highpoint. Good visuals and story telling on that one, the beat kinda reminded me of that Biggie ish "I got a story to tell', I think thats it anyway....

Solid shyt though, you should throw together all the tracjks you did and make a mixtape for the hell of it, it'd be better then some of ish these sohh rappers are hawking on here heavy...

stay up

Ecliptik
10-11-07, 12:20 AM
sound alot better on audio...

...ALOT

W.I.Z.E.
10-11-07, 11:19 AM
Second verse was the standout, third was good, I'm not fukkin wit the first one, I get the progression **** just not fukkin with it. This was a decent track though, that second verse was really the highpoint. Good visuals and story telling on that one, the beat kinda reminded me of that Biggie ish "I got a story to tell', I think thats it anyway....
Solid shyt though, you should throw together all the tracjks you did and make a mixtape for the hell of it, it'd be better then some of ish these sohh rappers are hawking on here heavy...
stay up

Man it's funny you say that. I'm working on three things now and need to manage my "life" along with it.

One is a mixtape..
Two is my own album "Step it Up"..which is a follow up to my unreleased "Got a Mic". Which sold a blazing 2 copies...One to me and the other to ghost writer...me.
Three is a book that I'm about 25 pages into.

Bottom line, thanks for the feed and I'll keep posting. BTW, I have audio posted in the Audio Lounge if you want to hear some joints from the "Got a Mic" album. LMAO

http://forums.sohh.com/showthread.php?t=915809