"Blackout" ft. Cali Bud

[Ecliptik]

*turns on "It's Me B!tches" instrumental*

Ecliptik:
I'ma spit a punch in each line, til i damn near vomit fist..
Call me sik, i prep that piff like a street pharmacist..
I raise the steaks, as if i'm holdin fajita plates..
And if i'm not 'back early', then trust i'll make it 'titi-llate'..:laugh:
Mind blowin spits, like i got no gag reflex..
Check yaself, i'm no ***, ya ass bounced - rejected..
I aim for ya head like i pop'd a pimple..
My flow steady as if i 'dam' near blocked the river..
I'll block ya shots until the damn teflon quivers..
And bring out your inner b!tch wit bloody marys and a mirror..
I deliver current events and for you thats bad news..
Cause i'm bustin wit twin guns and given em tat 2's..
And just because you rap, don't mean ya 'yo-goes' dannon..
You'll think i'm tight wit the heat, i prefer a loose a cannon..
When i open'd doors, i used to knock on Cali bud's..
But he no longer in cali, so now i knock Collie Buddz..

You don't wanna see me black out (black out)...
Cuz ill turn the lights out and have a whole community hurt
I spit fire when i black out (black out)...
ya feel the burn/ creamate you then i piss in ya urn/

Ecliptik:
Spit that flip flop flow and then leave a niqqa 'toe-up'..
And watch em get ugly, til they fuccin neck throw up..
If you don't back up, i'll cut you off at the knee wit the pound..
And sit you back up so i can watch you stand down..
Niqqa i hold more rounds than obnoxious battles..
Kats like "Damn yo ass funny!", now i'm 'Blazin' Saddles'..
No need to touchdown, middle finder for a hand sign..
No need to tape that....AND I PUT THAT ON MY SIDE LINES!..
Known for the chrome and so raw off the dome..
I'll give you a bigger loss as if G-Unit signed Jones..
And let you kick rocks like a fuccin flinstone..
Force feed you the pebbles until you fruity to the bone..
If you wanna increase ya flow, then put water to melon..
And drop bombs like the thoughts of convicted felon.. *sorry yayo*
When i black out, i do more then just dim the lights kid..
Get a life and be a real man...just like Usher's wife is..:ohmy:

Wanna know what i think when i black out (black out)..
Makes me wish ya could all RipTheMic..and die like that site did
I disrespect kats when i black out (black out)..
disrespect this, i'll twist ya neck and diss-connect it/

Cali Bud:
You already know the outcome when I ride wit e-clip..
We cover the biggest shining star like a eclipse..
Eternally interrupted by the internal feeling..
That my meaning aint making much sense..
But in my defense I think you’d take offense too..
If you grew but they still treated you like it’s your debut..
Bouncing to the next lyrical depth on a bungee cord..
As I battle fierce fire spitters with liquid swords..
I exceed mosts expectations as I proceed..
Rupture your optic nerve trying to see me move at lights speed..
Vest protected chests are still penetrated by bombs..
As blood seeps through anyway like cheap tampons..
You writers should listen up when I address..
You with no breath left when my lungs compress
And I Black Out…..


You don't wanna see me.....
Cuz ill turn the lights out and have a whole community hurt
I spit fire .....
ya feel the burn/ creamate you then i piss in ya urn/
Wanna know what i think.....
Makes me wish ya could all RipTheMic..and die like that site did
I fuccin disrespect.....
disrespect this, i'll twist ya neck and diss-connect it/

[Sicilian Spit]

Very nicely composed. Punch lines were ill, not sure I got every one, but they were tight. The only thing about writing punchlines every line is that it gets hard to rhyme dopely sometimes, and clip's verses show that in a couple places. Cali Bud's verse was nothing amazing, but definitely solid and had several good lines. Overall, very high up on the thermometer fellas.

[MaCRonI]

Nice drop ya'll. Dope verse with interesting images and cool mettas!!!! Both of ya'll came decent on this so I've gotta hand ya'll a...7.9/10

[Ecliptik]

thanx ya'll

[Ecliptik]

uppity up...

[Raw Spits]

:laugh: :laugh: @ the hook........Good creativity rockin on this one


Cali ended this pretty good as well........8.1/10

[Ecliptik]

thank you much...

[ILL_FAM]

yeah i like this hooks where orginal...some of my favourite lines :yes:

:king: nice one boys

[theman080]

This was hot, you guys should stop bein *****es and do audio, this would be cool over a live beat. I liked that bombs penetrate vests line by Cali, and Ecliptik had a few gems as well. I liked the more rounds than obnoxious battles ish, dont know how i missed this earlier....

Good shyt

Stay Up

[Ecliptik]

i'd love to do audio...but i'm fallin behind:sad:...cali JUST got his mic like 2 days ago...(assclown):dry:

*waits for pay day*

SOON!!!!

thanx for the feed

[Mukel]

I felt Ecliptik's verses were better than Cali's, though from the feedback, it seems most prefer Cali's, just dunno, preffered your whole rhyme scheme more...you gonna stop cryin now, i gave you feedback! lol

[Ecliptik]

alot better:yes: