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MaCRonI
09-26-07, 12:45 AM
Shadows slowly crawling, darkness its ghastly stare/
black spots impair my vision, stiffen my neck hair/
Until they standin on end, Goosebumps cover my epidermis/
As if I’m havin allergic reaction, my spirit can endure this/
So I shiver to very core of my soul, sweat accumulating/
my confidence fading, my heart pacing, adrenaline raging/
Eyes darting around the room, shifting at the slightest/
Interruption of the silence, a single creek dilates my iris/
My lungs Hyperventilate, as mind projectin garble thoughts/
Some givin the solace I sought, others retrace horrors once fought/
Leaving more distraught, paralyzed by nostalgic nightmares/
Stage Four malignant cancer sapping my Aunty’s lungs of air/
Seething car crash injuries loosening my cousin’s grasp on life/
Beggin’ a shot friend to live as existence empty from they eyes/
An Innocent’s screams as the law fights for them to be dehumanize/
I move uncontrollably as My greatest phobia took its true form/
Leaving nothing behind in the world to reshape how future minds form/

Ecliptik
09-26-07, 01:04 AM
you actually coulda added this to your last spit....good stuff....been on a roll as of lates...

Sicilian Spit
09-26-07, 01:28 AM
I was feelin this. Could have done without the last four bars, but still a nice drop.

MaCRonI
09-26-07, 10:50 AM
thanks yall........muc love
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MaCRonI
09-28-07, 06:03 PM
feed me

S|kH
09-30-07, 04:21 PM
I was feelin this. Could have done without the last four bars, but still a nice drop.


damn, you think so?

I felt
"I move uncontrollably as My greatest phobia took its true form/
Leaving nothing behind in the world to reshape how future minds form/"

was the best bar of the verse.

I wasn't feeling the beginning as much for some reason, but the last 2 bars is scratched-hook material.

#1rapper
10-01-07, 09:28 PM
hmmm