New Freestyle

[Mukel]

I know i should give them a title but, it is what it is,
a freestyle so, no need for a title to be honest,
been completley off with my recent rhymes,
but here it goes...a battle sort of theme, so keep that in mind...

Your reputation wasn’t worth your foolish pride,
now your left comatose and vegetated,
army regiment, your a corporal and im a sergeant,
you vagrant, you vagabond, im infiltrating like james bond,
and your wrong to think you can do battle with me,
cos your whole rap styles cheesy like dairlylea,
this verse is for free, next one it'll cost ya,
cos i'll make you blue like your names anthony costa,
we made ore's to explore shores,
grew hands and feet instead of paws,
howled at the moon, as the star turned full,
pulled down the mask, and concentrated on the task in hand,
im a man with troubles, who likes to pop other peoples bubbles,
to see others hurt is a pleasure of mine,
to see your tears is another treasure of mine,
to see me laughing f*ggot, you must think out of my mind,
cos when you get me going, im a kick your behind,
and you can run but i will find, and destroy you to dust,
leave your body to rot, stinkin up the joint with a must.

[Ecliptik]

no.....you do need titles.....cause more then half of the crap on this board is honestly freestyles but it helps set a theme or some kinda indication what the spit is about....you get no feed because ALL your spits are titled "Freestyle"...no one wants to continuously see "freestyles" because the **** is boring text wize....more then half the crap i drop is a free but i know if i drop "freestyle" i'm not gonna get any kinda feed.....hense part of the reason (minus skill) that i average 10 replies a thread (as well as others like 080, cali, wize....etc...)


anyways.....your flow scheme seems to go off more and more....take your time....it's ok to go a week or 2 with out spittin to let your mind rejuvenate itself....

[Sicilian Spit]

How the f*ck does a star turn full?

[Mukel]

How the f*ck does a star turn full?


Moon is a star, half moon, full moon...thank you and goodnight clever clogs.

Fair enough, Ecliptik, I sense a little hostility, is something bothering you? lol,
cheers for the feedback, im grateful for it, your one of the few who consistently give me feedback, which I do appreciate, though the first 6 lines were just a bizzare rant of you venting your sexual frustration lol.
Heres just what you need :hug: no homo!

[Sicilian Spit]

You're joking right? I know you don't actually think the moon is a star, no one could possibly be that dumb.