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Witness
09-23-07, 04:48 PM
Broken Past, Shredded dreams, gained only pain
from that last melodic theme, between
the dream , and the plain little girl with the same
kind a name Elaine, the evil lured her with a candy cane
only to maintain his own intress, in his domain
to do insane things to girl who is as humane
as everything

as everything

as everything


VERSE#1:

In this world, there are men who are insane
people who wants to go and blow up an air plane,
and men that are inhumane, like Saddam Hussein
because of these men, no child is safe from the pain
from the men who´s campaign is to obtain
girls and make them to do what they want, with a leg in the chain
these bastards just sit around the house drinking Vermont
girls crying in the corner cuz there is no aunt
to help them out from the misery, and make a closer
we´ll all need to pick up the arms agains these freak´s
who torture and miss-use our girls for week´s, and week´s
if we can one freak who speak, then I can use my techniques
to flush the other "Flesh Sellers" out from the dark
we only need one spark, to open up every question mark
In my opinion we should throw all these bastards to the tiger shark
or just let them stand in row until they get shot

Sicilian Spit
09-24-07, 03:19 AM
I dunno. Not really seeing improvement yet. Still too off beat for me, and some of the rhymes are forced and awkward.