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Trojanman
09-23-07, 02:09 PM
my nightmare starts
when i open the door to the other side
then seeing 40 white girls waiting for me
this has to be a setup
like what happened with kobe
i ain't gonna f*ck with them though
run to the bathroom with one and the next
quick sex on the toilet then throw em away
my nose burns from the smell of p*ssy
and i ain't even eating her out
who is this coming into the bathroom
rayful edmonds, i thought you were in jail
he tells me naw, what the f*ck are you doing
every successful black man has one white girl on their side
even though folks will frown upon ya interracial marriage
i looked at him like he was trying to kill me
dude trying to roll up on me, i ain't gay or bisexual, leave me alone
i f*ck with the last 2 girls til my d!ck felt sore
anybody who was with me in the bathroom
prolly overdosed over the secondhand smell of p*ssy
i walked around my room and realized that there was no
rayful edmond or no more white girls
i felt at peace even though my heart was racing
the energy in me was fading
i fell asleep thinking that i should call somebody to wake me up
in case i slept for too long

MaCRonI
09-23-07, 10:57 PM
man, this is okay....but lacks in poetic structure and texture that make it well poetic....seems to random..and lacks a cadence makes it feel ill conieved......this more like a drop that doesn't rhyme.....elevate dawg...
5.3/10

Richard Bey
10-16-07, 03:36 PM
:huh: