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CaseyJones
09-20-07, 12:06 AM
Sorry about the paragraph form i wont write like this in the future. Not really happy with how this turned out, but i feel it has some good lines.

A Tree Grows in Boston
And ive got just what I need
I don’t bother with these stems and seeds
A Tree Grows in Boston
And you that it’s the truth
That ill never forget my roots
A Tree Grows in Boston

JP to be exact/ for a trip ill take you back/ born by the banks/ where the river flows/ and the sycamores grow/plus the sky glows/ when the sunsets/ but not yet/ its just the start of the day/ mom and dad planted seeds back in 86/so now its 87 and they call me Nick/ Febraury 1-5 was the date/ then I learned my first words back in 88/ by 89 I could walk and talk fine/ started school and tried to color in straight lines/ but **** that even though Id hate it/ Id graduate it on time/ Born in 87 so now its 98 and im 11/ Dad packed up and left/ house became a mess/ mom had to save every penny/we didn’t have many/ but we had enough to pass/ enough for us to last/ through the months and years/ had peers in every group/ never fit in to tell the truth/ Grandparents kept me rooted/ Suited to be in this family tree/ my foundation no hesitation when I recall/

Chorus

They say an acorn doesn’t fall from the tree/ but not for me/
im just a rebel flower child/ crack a smile/ as I sit and reminisce/
about my younger years and my first kiss/ and my first rhymes/ and my first time/ had some teenage angst/ got to give thanks/Just a tree that grew tall and strong/ trying to get a long/ with the body of mick jagger/ plus I got his swagger too/ long hair thin frame/ don’t care attitude/ don’t care that its rude/ when I express myself/ and I need all the help/ I can get/ dedicated to the people ill never forgetLong hair spirit of 67’/ and im coming from the 617/ to get to heaven sometimes you go through hell/ but its just as well/ cause now im moving at my own pace/ because a weed is just a flower growing in the wrong place/ and in my own face/ new wrinkles and lines/ 20 years of time flashing before my eyes/

Sicilian Spit
09-20-07, 01:48 AM
I like the concept, I actually tried to write some autobiographical sh*t like this but its too hard if you try to cover your whole life like this. Interesting rhyme scheme although it doesn't work for me in some parts, rhymes could definitely hit harder. But if it means something to you, I guess that's what matters

Ecliptik
09-20-07, 09:43 AM
hmmm....different...i'ma get back to this when i have more time...

theman080
09-21-07, 04:36 PM
Ray Ray is that you...

Nah but really, this was smooth, I liked it