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Sicilian Spit
09-17-07, 07:19 PM
Words are infectious, ya'll aint verbally next to me
Verbal vasectomy if you disturb or step to me
Impressive heat, you like a gerbil in a rectum, B
Asphixiatin while I flex, proceed to wreck the beat
Hectic streets breed eclectic beats
The text'll speak.. for itself, my section be
Filled wit more crime drama than Law and Order
Hit the turf pulled out the llama when he saw the mortar
Poured the shells out.. two at a time
Never got bailed out now he doin his time
And his chick bailed out on him, he losin his dime
But he spelled out some words and seen he fluid wit rhymes
So he usin his lines as a therapeutic session
Since he been shootin at guys you mighta got a rude impression
Improved his lexicon and seen it change his view
Now he vibin and scribin and keepin hangin through

Sicilian Spit
09-19-07, 05:43 PM
Damn all these views and no replies... Guess I'll have to start it. This started out as just a swagger piece and then turned more deep on me, gotta go where the rhyme takes you sometimes I guess.

Ecliptik
09-19-07, 07:35 PM
this ain't bad....like you said...the subject kinda switches on you....but eh...wasn't bad....but still...people prefer to see you stick on the same subject rather then flip/flop

Sicilian Spit
09-19-07, 08:36 PM
Valid point, thanks for the feedback.

MaCRonI
09-22-07, 07:07 PM
Silk.....like peeps have told me....go feed some other stuff & more feed will come. This was a decent drop...freestyle type ish.......good vocab and dope multis....but at times basic.......focs on being fresh 99% of ya lines and you'll be good!!!!

7.5/10