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W.I.Z.E.
09-16-07, 06:48 PM
Aint this some sh!t, DA sonnab!tch,
I'm outraged, can't believe Jenna 6,
In West VA, a girls life taken away,
raped and tortured locked away multiple days,
Sean Bell man the cops perform well,
Diallo...c'mon then you wonder why,
Ppl. stay feelin' that the cops should die,
There's a war going on we aint safe outside,
The hate divide, rockin' war paint with pride,
Or not...we aint unified not in the least,
We use red and blue colors to spark our beef
Lookin' for leaders to give our hearts relief,
Each one teach one the leader you seek,
Is you..No rocks thrown I rock in my throne,
made of dust complacent that I got a home,
"Hey Ma I made it!!" while others enslaved with,
values that made them brave the slave ships.
But if you really wanna know...we got ourselves to blame,
Victim mentality often gets us slain.
It hurts my brain these shackles still remain,
We refrain from progress and so my pain.
Is paramount..blacks lead the Harlem Renassiance,
In the 1920's,
80 years later black folks act like a debutante.
And now THAT community = regression personified,
And WE did this ourselves so save all the alibies.
I'm just venting...a void that i had to mention,
Cuz there's a lot going on we could be preventin'
It's a dog fight and they make Vick seem worse,
While we put innocent black vicitms in the hearse.
they beat on Vick but treat humans worse,
While the cops send innocent black victims to the hearse.

Cali_Bud
09-16-07, 07:04 PM
Is you..No rocks thrown I rock in my throne,
made of dust complacent that I got a home,
"Hey Ma I made it!!" while others enslaved with,
values that made them brave the slave ships.
But if you really wanna know...we got ourselves to blame,
Victim mentality often gets us slain.
It hurts my brain while these shackles still remain,
We refrain from progress and so my pain.
Is paramount..blacks lead the Harlem Renassiance,
In the 1920's,

Different topic backed up by good lines = Hot Drop. The part I quoted is what stood out for me. Nice W.I.Z.E

CaseyJones
09-16-07, 07:52 PM
yeah that verse definately has some really hot lines. keep it up

Ecliptik
09-17-07, 01:28 AM
i bit deeper then i prefer....still good...

Sicilian Spit
09-17-07, 01:39 AM
All the opinions sum up my sentiments. Lines could have been lyrically a little doper but sometimes you have to sacrifice for the sake of the content. Nice drop