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homeyjay
09-12-07, 06:59 PM
Boom is the sound that echoes off the walls
the mic slowly decends from a brother's hand
tis once was da place where i would race
has evolved into a lieu that i have no common
alas my tenture i must say was over stayed
those here when i first arrived no longer journey
their quads now occupied by diversified minds
i bow down and thank the almighty for the oppurtunity
humbily will be my departure from this great stage
big ups to my girl Skater for the backin' have u seen her?
as well as Slave to a Player da poet/rhyme sayer w/layers
I wouldn't even begin to forgive me got to thank Sexxy Dee
whatever happen to da brother Whoshotya??
this ain't no homo move just was thinkin 'bout ya dude
to the bro Meso who flows reminded me of da Isley jam's of slo
just to name a few who help me find my niche, I Thank you
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I tripped and fell face first unto the pavement
a stream of pain raced through my nostrils
in search of an exit near the rear of my skull
while tasting the crimson saltiness of my pedigree
I heard laughter with the questioning of my state
desiring to renounce while aware I must persevere
I arose revealing abrasive knees through torn pants
sheer embarassment though afflicted me instantly
I chose to proceed in spite of my current state
many have fewer advantages yet are able to gain
so I knew it was time to discard sympathy's crutches
the humility tolerated will serve as a reminder
when the oppurtunity to waiver surfaces again
realizing that i must look beyond the drapes
to find the strength needed to battle my Deamons
while i free myself from this hood incarceration
after spitting out some blood along with a few teeth
I blew the dust and spyderwebs from my dreams
went and found some shades as the light started to beam

sexydeltagirl
09-18-07, 10:39 AM
Awwwww, HomeyJay please don't go!!

I know it's been dead around here but I thought it was cause of the summer, folks traveling, doing things etc. that's why I haven't really been writing just enjoying life. But I picked up my book and Im gonna release some of the things I've been thinking about but had 2 much on my plate to write down....

Don't leave we need you! :(

skatethewall
10-06-07, 11:28 PM
Boom is the sound that echoes off the walls
the mic slowly decends from a brother's hand
tis once was da place where i would race
has evolved into a lieu that i have no common
alas my tenture i must say was over stayed
those here when i first arrived no longer journey
their quads now occupied by diversified minds
i bow down and thank the almighty for the oppurtunity
humbily will be my departure from this great stage
big ups to my girl Skater for the backin' have u seen her?
as well as Slave to a Player da poet/rhyme sayer w/layers
I wouldn't even begin to forgive me got to thank Sexxy Dee
whatever happen to da brother Whoshotya??
this ain't no homo move just was thinkin 'bout ya dude
to the bro Meso who flows reminded me of da Isley jam's of slo
just to name a few who help me find my niche, I Thank you
________________________________________________
I tripped and fell face first unto the pavement
a stream of pain raced through my nostrils
in search of an exit near the rear of my skull
while tasting the crimson saltiness of my pedigree
I heard laughter with the questioning of my state
desiring to renounce while aware I must persevere
I arose revealing abrasive knees through torn pants
sheer embarassment though afflicted me instantly
I chose to proceed in spite of my current state
many have fewer advantages yet are able to gain
so I knew it was time to discard sympathy's crutches
the humility tolerated will serve as a reminder
when the oppurtunity to waiver surfaces again
realizing that i must look beyond the drapes
to find the strength needed to battle my Deamons
while i free myself from this hood incarceration
after spitting out some blood along with a few teeth
I blew the dust and spyderwebs from my dreams
went and found some shades as the light started to beam

HJ...i feel you on this one...i'm not leaving and i certainly hope you don't either...

i think you've been around here longer than i but those names you mentioned made me nostalgic and a little sad; i miss them too.

i have learned so much from your writing. the second piece you wrote here is unbelievable! your writing is so brilliant and i'm NOT trying to feed your ego, i truly believe that. i'm just one girl but i hope that you cherish this gift you have been given and i hope someday you share it with the world in some way. the rhythm and soul of your piece "Residential District" is a classic.

as for this place, i will start posting more, i need to...it's such a big part of me (writing) and i need to grow. let's all hang in here, anyway we can...through this crazy life.

homeyjay
10-08-07, 02:18 PM
My Sisters, My Sisters, I got nothin' but luv for ya'
You two are my favorite writers on this set
not just for your wondeful pieces but for your courage
to compliment and encourage others
You both are well grounded and secure enough
that you don't have to ego trip and for that I tip my hat
for you are the real heart and soul of the p. c.
and forever have my admiration
a brother's plate is on full tilt right now
so it's hard to be imaginative or creative
gotta get back on my square if you will
but I'll keep checkin' the scene in hopes of
reading some joints from you two especially
a brother is a big fan so keep 'em comin'
and thanks for being so kind and may God Bless

sexydeltagirl
10-08-07, 05:21 PM
My Sisters, My Sisters, I got nothin' but luv for ya'
You two are my favorite writers on this set
not just for your wondeful pieces but for your courage
to compliment and encourage others
You both are well grounded and secure enough
that you don't have to ego trip and for that I tip my hat
for you are the real heart and soul of the p. c.
and forever have my admiration
a brother's plate is on full tilt right now
so it's hard to be imaginative or creative
gotta get back on my square if you will
but I'll keep checkin' the scene in hopes of
reading some joints from you two especially
a brother is a big fan so keep 'em comin'
and thanks for being so kind and may God Bless

Awwww! Babes handle ya business - I'll def. be here waiting to read ya next masterpiece....

:hug:

slave2aplaya
11-03-07, 04:45 PM
Always nuff love for HJ
You know what you're doing helps keep the rest of us going...


Missed u guys maaaaan