TheMan080.....|VS|.....Razzia||2-1||VOTES UP||

[theman080]

Due Date: ???
Line Limit: ??? (just post reasonably close to whoever drops first)
No Biting & all that ish

[Razzia]

*stretches finger muscles*




im the truth homie. you can't really debate it
you can get touched... and i AINT EVEN FEELIN CREATIVE
fukk touched, ill swing a battle axe and leave your back detached
cuz im pissed. the fact is that i asked for a challenge f.ag!
but you bein eager as a mufukka to to have at raz
is heresy... gettin away with murder isn't half as bad
actually you're more like grand theft... a massive snatch
i'll drop a deuce on you and break the board like the shaq attack

may as well spit from end to start with this cracka's raps
cuz you tryin me aint even outta line - its BACKWARDS ASS

you should make it reflex to quit when you scrap wit raz
just give up on your ELDER AUTO... like cadillac*
see, me and vodka share one trait, maybe two
they fukk you up with punches and they're 080-proof!
i fathered sohh battles, you just baby food
this duke's-a-hazard... got you wettin your daisy dukes

so anybody talkin bout oppresion can save it son
cuz all "the man"'s holdin down is his boyfriends cranium









*cadillac discontinued the eldorado... for those who didn't catch that

[theman080]

check.....

Dusted the cobwebs off, just for me to fry a fukker
And cave his chest in, shoulders high-five eachother
Ya punclines supply a sucka, but nothin to fear yet
Raz is comin close to Bustah rhymes, but more like Israel Ramirez
Pop shells & sear vets, its been a while since this old phaggit spit
Newsflash before the tools act, ya fans left when ya swagger did
I dont need a hammer lift, you'll get punched out this time
But since your call out wanted comp. , I'll dumb down my rhymes
Your prewritten scripts are hit or miss, just a reminder your whack
A loss is written on ya face, the nine finds an exit sign in ya back
Your wonderin why nobody pays you attention, its cuz ya shyts trash
There's too many characters in this movie, you'll end up in a big cast
I'll rip you with sick incisions so quick your existance thinnin
Does your intuition tell you you're gonna win, that tells me you into-wishin
I'll flip positions, my knife is havin flashbacks, all it sees is deepthroat
But cant locate any remembrance or semblance that ever was this geek dope

:smoker:

[#1rapper]

on first look this shyt is close..ill post my vote in a lil bit after further evaluation

[#1rapper]

im the truth homie. you can't really debate it
you can get touched... and i AINT EVEN FEELIN CREATIVE
haha..could of been done better...but nonetheless nice
fukk touched, ill swing a battle axe and leave your back detached
cuz im pissed. the fact is that i asked for a challenge f.ag!
good flow..but not sayin much..okay u called him a f@g...but you bein eager as a mufukka to to have at raz
is heresy... gettin away with murder isn't half as bad
pretty good right here
actually you're more like grand theft... a massive snatch
i'll drop a deuce on you and break the board like the shaq attack
decent...

may as well spit from end to start with this cracka's raps
cuz you tryin me aint even outta line - its BACKWARDS ASS
haha liked that one

you should make it reflex to quit when you scrap wit raz
just give up on your ELDER AUTO... like cadillac*
damn...nice hit
see, me and vodka share one trait, maybe two
they fukk you up with punches and they're 080-proof!
good name play and hit
i fathered sohh battles, you just baby food
this duke's-a-hazard... got you wettin your daisy dukes
ehh

so anybody talkin bout oppresion can save it son
cuz all "the man"'s holdin down is his boyfriends cranium
should of ended with last line imo

alright now to theman

Dusted the cobwebs off, just for me to fry a fukker
And cave his chest in, shoulders high-five eachother
ehh..pretty good thug talk
Ya punclines supply a sucka, but nothin to fear yet
Raz is comin close to Bustah rhymes, but more like Israel Ramirez
Heh...pretty good
Pop shells & sear vets, its been a while since this old phaggit spit
Newsflash before the tools act, ya fans left when ya swagger did
ouch..feelin the attitude righ there
I dont need a hammer lift, you'll get punched out this time
But since your call out wanted comp. , I'll dumb down my rhymes
i get it..but it was ehh to me
Your prewritten scripts are hit or miss, just a reminder your whack
A loss is written on ya face, the nine finds an exit sign in ya back
Alright...
Your wonderin why nobody pays you attention, its cuz ya shyts trash
There's too many characters in this movie, you'll end up in a big cast
NICE..liked that one
I'll rip you with sick incisions so quick your existance thinnin
Does your intuition tell you you're gonna win, that tells me you into-wishin
WOAH line of the whole battle right there..
I'll flip positions, my knife is havin flashbacks, all it sees is deepthroat
But cant locate any remembrance or semblance that ever was this geek dope
ehh alright ending..decent

Alright so as i said previously..this battle was close, razzia, your third part was all fire..it was sick..and your first part was also nuts..BUT it did have some lines that were just ehh

Theman you had some filler..but also had some nice wordplay and hits...had the line of the battle...sht iono who won this fuccin thing!...damn..lets see...

ALRIGHT...i gotta go with razzia...

But yo..like isaid this shyt was almost to close to judge..i was really about to say draw but in the end i just felt razzia's shyt more

BUt that one line 080..sick..if you could make a whole diss like that..i would give u my password and tell u to have fun

[theman080]

come one you lame fukks i know you see the thread


smh @ these ho's

[Sicilian Spit]

You usually come harder than this 080...

[Ecliptik]

Raz:

im the truth homie. you can't really debate it
you can get touched... and i AINT EVEN FEELIN CREATIVE

very eh....not much of a punch at all to be honest...

fukk touched, ill swing a battle axe and leave your back detached
cuz im pissed. the fact is that i asked for a challenge f.ag!

filler...

but you bein eager as a mufukka to to have at raz
is heresy... gettin away with murder isn't half as bad

filler...

actually you're more like grand theft... a massive snatch
i'll drop a deuce on you and break the board like the shaq attack

blah to this whole concept....even is it was delivered well....it still wouldn't hit....atleast not against someone who CAN battle...

may as well spit from end to start with this cracka's raps
cuz you tryin me aint even outta line - its BACKWARDS ASS

unless you was connecting "crack(a's)" and ass....this "punch" was maybe a finger flick.....if that...

you should make it reflex to quit when you scrap wit raz
just give up on your ELDER AUTO... like cadillac*

finally...a punchline...:dry:

see, me and vodka share one trait, maybe two
they fukk you up with punches and they're 080-proof!

i like the concept....but what vodka "punches"?

i fathered sohh battles, you just baby food
this duke's-a-hazard... got you wettin your daisy dukes

not sure if this line is biggin up 080 for gettin daisy dukes wet....or if it's a diss and he wears daisy dukes.....needs better wording and delivery...otherwize this whole punch backfires...

so anybody talkin bout oppresion can save it son
cuz all "the man"'s holdin down is his boyfriends cranium

punch #2.....:yes:


overall....this was ALOT of filler...and wit 080 you need ALL punches....not alot....ALL....i was told you were a top battle head....but with all due.....[GSP voice] i was not impressed with your performance tonight... [/GSP voice]



080:

Dusted the cobwebs off, just for me to fry a fukker
And cave his chest in, shoulders high-five eachother

lol....nice visual

Ya punclines supply a sucka, but nothin to fear yet
Raz is comin close to Bustah rhymes, but more like Israel Ramirez

eh....good set up....bad finish...

Pop shells & sear vets, its been a while since this old phaggit spit
Newsflash before the tools act, ya fans left when ya swagger did

ouch...

I dont need a hammer lift, you'll get punched out this time
But since your call out wanted comp. , I'll dumb down my rhymes

eh....filler...

Your prewritten scripts are hit or miss, just a reminder your whack
A loss is written on ya face, the nine finds an exit sign in ya back

somethings missing...this is clever yet unfinished at the same time....if that makes sense..lol

Your wonderin why nobody pays you attention, its cuz ya shyts trash
There's too many characters in this movie, you'll end up in a big cast

filler...

I'll rip you with sick incisions so quick your existance thinnin
Does your intuition tell you you're gonna win, that tells me you into-wishin

nice....more brag then punch...but still strong

I'll flip positions, my knife is havin flashbacks, all it sees is deepthroat
But cant locate any remembrance or semblance that ever was this geek dope

ok finish....nothin special...

overall.....not your best battle verse....but it did get the job done....but i was also extremely disappointed with you because i've never seen you use this much filler in a verse....

anyways.....this battle was hands down theman080....sorry, but this was a battle...and if you REALLY read raz verse....it's nothing but filler...i've seen PUNCHO spit more punchlines....oh...and raz....don't think this vote is riding cause i honestly don't like 080 much at all....(and he knows i'm comin for him due to the tourney *cough* fluke)

vote: theman080

[Razzia]

may as well spit from end to start with this cracka's raps
cuz you tryin me aint even outta line - its BACKWARDS ASS

unless you was connecting "crack(a's)" and ass....this "punch" was maybe a finger flick.....if that...



see, me and vodka share one trait, maybe two
they fukk you up with punches and they're 080-proof!

i like the concept....but what vodka "punches"?





naw homie... his raps is what i was calling ass. end to start is backwards. read it again
lol

... and vodka goes in punch dude





no worries tho. i wouldn't have suspected it a hate vote... didnt really expect id need to explain ish tho

1-1


if you read the battle, drop a vote. i dont want none of yall peeping toms

[Ecliptik]

awwwe...i see....sorry....didn't think too hard into it for the 'punch/ vodka' line....but i did re-read the backwards lines...i still didn't feel it though...

[theman080]

1-1

good looks at the votes

UP

[Child Proof]

Ight so I'll go line by line like the other votes just to stay consistent -

RAZZIA Verse:

im the truth homie. you can't really debate it
you can get touched... and i AINT EVEN FEELIN CREATIVE

Nice demeaning start

fukk touched, ill swing a battle axe and leave your back detached
cuz im pissed. the fact is that i asked for a challenge f.ag!

Still choppin down at 080 but meh...

but you bein eager as a mufukka to to have at raz
is heresy... gettin away with murder isn't half as bad
actually you're more like grand theft... a massive snatch
i'll drop a deuce on you and break the board like the shaq attack

This was all hittin, although I din't like the Shaq line...kinda dates you a bit IMO cuz Shaq aint break a board in a miiiinute

may as well spit from end to start with this cracka's raps
cuz you tryin me aint even outta line - its BACKWARDS ASS

Nice and funny...I like

you should make it reflex to quit when you scrap wit raz
just give up on your ELDER AUTO... like cadillac*

Yea I din't make the connect with this line and It din't connect in this battle either IMO

see, me and vodka share one trait, maybe two
they fukk you up with punches and they're 080-proof!

Even I got this...how u miss it Clip? Nice hit!!

i fathered sohh battles, you just baby food
this duke's-a-hazard... got you wettin your daisy dukes

Another nice hit and demeaning as fukk

so anybody talkin bout oppresion can save it son
cuz all "the man"'s holdin down is his boyfriends cranium

Nice end


080:

Dusted the cobwebs off, just for me to fry a fukker
And cave his chest in, shoulders high-five eachother

Nice start up...gettin at his SOHH age

Ya punclines supply a sucka, but nothin to fear yet
Raz is comin close to Bustah rhymes, but more like Israel Ramirez

O snap, I din't like the set up but the last line is funny in a very fukked up way and a nice lil hit

Pop shells & sear vets, its been a while since this old phaggit spit
Newsflash before the tools act, ya fans left when ya swagger did

That's almost a one hitter-quitter right there...nice!!

I dont need a hammer lift, you'll get punched out this time
But since your call out wanted comp. , I'll dumb down my rhymes

Meh wasn't really hittin...

Your prewritten scripts are hit or miss, just a reminder your whack
A loss is written on ya face, the nine finds an exit sign in ya back
Your wonderin why nobody pays you attention, its cuz ya shyts trash
There's too many characters in this movie, you'll end up in a big cast

Not a hit here just filler but the last line was nice!

I'll rip you with sick incisions so quick your existance thinnin
Does your intuition tell you you're gonna win, that tells me you into-wishin
I'll flip positions, my knife is havin flashbacks, all it sees is deepthroat
But cant locate any remembrance or semblance that ever was this geek dope

Killer ending!! That whole sh!t hit!

Dang...goin line by line din't help the way I thought it might...lemme see...I liked Raz's approach in talkin down to 080; the flow and wordplay were consistent and smooth throughout...and minimized the filler.

080 had slightly more filler but had some really hittin lines that IMO outweighed it. Flow was a lil off in spots but I think 080 edged this out off the strength of that middle line and the ending...those had me like whoa when I read em...Raz's joint is nice but none of the lines really wowed me. I think Raz slept IMHO.

[theman080]

L
Ay
Vate

[Propaganda]

i expected more from this. razzia had that cruel "who the fukk is this kid?" tone and was alot more smooth in his set-ups and deliveries. he was a bit more creative and most of his punches were decent, but nothing really stands out or makes you go "ohhh".

theman, as usual, flowed and rhyme schemed his way thru the battle. which as usual, ended up with a lot of slick sounding filler. the decent punches he did have were played (ie. big cast, shoulders high five). that intution thing COULDA been fukkin crazy ill if you flipped it better...that was sick wordplay but fell short as a diss.


i'll have to give a slight edge to razzia. imo he was doing more damage, no big hits, but enough for the win.

[theman080]

2-2

good look on all the votes...

[theman080]

2-2
good look on all the votes...

sooooooooooooo

[Ecliptik]

soooooooooo....:whistle:

[Sicilian Spit]

I'ma give this one to 080. More consistent and didnt try to do too much, even though it still wasn't what I usually see from him.

[theman080]

3-2?

[obnoxious]

damn, razzia? lol the fvck you doin back on sohh? haha.. anyways this was a hot battle.. i just hating voting on text battles cuz there so far from what a battle should be.. on stage and on the street the shlt is worlds apart.. thats why im goin with razz on this.. his verse can be used in both situations real well.. it works in text and it would work in a street or live battle as well.. thats what made cats like timevirus great..
080 you stepped up game since i last read anything of yours, i just think you need to focus more on the punchlines and simplify it a bit, i like to call it complex-simplicity, if that makes sense to anybody.. like the into-wishin line was dope.. but coulda been toned down a bit to hit harder.. the sick incisions existance thinnin.. remembrance or (re?)semblance..
overall i found the punches decent but the filler just real weak, not really set up well..

anyway there you have it..

vote razz