Come "Witness" This

[Sicilian Spit]

Sisilian spit says that Im no hit in this rap ****
you can commit suicide, you have my permit
my **** is legit, for life, I emit
you can slice with a knife, get it?
"are you in a right forum?" you said it
that was the last blow I can stand from unfit
rapper who thinks saying ho, asshole and ****
will help you to make it, and get people to buy it
wanna face me? have a go at it
You are in disgrace for hole human race
so maybe I get your ass erased
and replaced , by some men from outer space
I got four trophy case´s waiting me to embrace
why did you even dissed me in the first place?
cuz now you will in any case, lose this battle
you cant refuse this battle, cuz you hate bruises
that´ll, you cant start running to mom in seattle
but I let you choose the field of battle
where I start abuse you and rattle
news flash, you will crash and burn
all remains is bone ash and annoying rash
what I heard, that you didnt even learn
but that **** aint really my concern
pay as you earn, you had your shot now its my turn
all of your **** is about sex, **** and booze
you got me all confused, are you here to diss hefner hugh
the man behind sex booze and other subjects
Im done, your face is all perplexed
like I have been dealing between decks
maybe some day you start to give people some respects
and start to rhyme from the heart
and stop doing what you do commercial art
080, 1#Rapper, WIZE these guys write like bruce lee´s martial art
they ****ing deserv a purple heart
sorry to say you are meant to be pushing laundry cart
Dont take this to heart man, just replying for that what you wrote for me, peace! Give comments !


Ok, I mean I could have written the most whackest sh*t of all time and still killed this dude, but anyways, heres what I put together.

First, spell my name right, second, quell ya lame writes
Third, turn the gun on yaself and learn how to aim right
Fourth, get up outta the forum, this isnt gay night
Fifth, I slay and prey on dikes like you who try to play write
Day and night, thats the difference between us
That and you stab dudes wit ya penis wit screams like Serena and Venus
What's ya genus? Cuz for real you look inhuman
I'm accurate wit bombs like Truman wit by the book acumen
Ruminatin for a second on how to ice this cat
Enticing facts will prove this dude's precisely whack
Tried to slice me back, now its time to slice his raps
Pick em apart concisely wit a nice attack
So if I'm gonna kill myself gotta think of a cool way
I'll take ya ho down to Jonestown and make her drink the Kool Aid
Then I'll come back to you and spit the rest down ya throat
The best line ya wrote was when you stole my nice little quote
Then you went off and said some sh*t that didnt even rhyme
Wasnt on beat, but like seasoned leaves believe I be on thyme
Believe Im gon climb a ledge and squat over the edge
Then dredge this kid with sh*t and piss for that which he alleged
And while you say you know some aliens, I stay on the globe
While you stray in ya robe from bed and end up anally probed
Got you prayin like Job that you don’t meet me in the city
Discreetly beat you wit no pity, thats the meet and greet committee
Yo, you said I could choose the site, now prepare to lose ya life
I’ll bruise ya wife wit foolish rife so bad you’ll wanna use a knife
To gouge out ya eyes, while I stand there grinnin
Like Houston you realize you done too much sinnin
The beginnin of the end, room’s spinnin, you ascend
One level but the devil has an invite to extend
Wish you never heard of me, now you burn etern-al-ly
I’ll murder this “emcee” if he escape the mental infirmary
Cuz he must be crazy to think that he could match my swagger
He could catch my dagger and end up wit a retched stagger
I betchu f*gger than a f*ckin reach around
This leech is bound to my speakers tryna breach on wut I preach about
Ya secret’s out, this motherf*cker never spits at b*tches
Like Jehovah, gonna die a virgin, can I get a Witness?
And what the f*ck is hefner hugh? Are you f*ckin dislexic?
But on the subject, I am like hefner, dude, gettin f*cked in a Lexus
Yes I do feature sex, but still manage to drop bombs
You just mad cuz I smashed and then managed to drop moms
Cant be ya role model, cuz I need a whole bottle
Drunk drivin, ran you over and didnt need the whole throttle
A cold motto, I’m in the city center braggin
You tied to the back of my car, so b*tch Enter the Draggin
You mentally laggin, don’t forget ya special helmet
Ya rhyme scheme, can’t sell it, while mine’s smoother than velvet
So next time think before you f*ck wit real lyricists
Tryin hard to mirror this, but I spit satiric sh*t
B*tch I’m a shooter, a looter, a real f*ckin trooper
I make this frilly filly look more silly than a real of f*ckin bloopers
Go load up the crack pipe, take ya millionth hit
Must be hallucinatin to think you could f*ck wit Sicilian Spit
Now get out the rhyme factory, ya lines aint satisfactory
Nothin but a detractin actor, go and get back on ya tractor, B
Actually I’m gettin sick of rippin at this cat
Now Ima grip the zip and light it up and leave this sh*t at that

[theman080]

wow that was long as fukk

your flow & multis were better in this one but you should work on the wording and some of the punchlines were ehhh...

And what the f*ck is hefner hugh? Are you f*ckin dislexic?
But on the subject, I am like hefner, dude, gettin f*cked in a Lexus
Yes I do feature sex, but still manage to drop bombs
You just mad cuz I smashed and then managed to drop moms
Cant be ya role model, cuz I need a whole bottle
Drunk drivin, ran you over and didnt need the whole throttle
A cold motto,

See that was pretty cool at least flow wise, the punches still weren;t anything crazy but it was decent....but then you drop this section which isn't hitting and is over simplistic...

You mentally laggin, don’t forget ya special helmet
Ya rhyme scheme, can’t sell it, while mine’s smoother than velvet
So next time think before you f*ck wit real lyricists
Tryin hard to mirror this, but I spit satiric sh*t
B*tch I’m a shooter, a looter, a real f*ckin trooper
I make this frilly filly look more silly than a real of f*ckin bloopers


So work on the postives and try to up your punchline game on disses and shyt, this is supposed to be witness getting bombed on but this type of shyt can be found in a lot of regular open mic drops.

[Sicilian Spit]

Yea honestly I never battled before these last two little sh*ts, but I think I'm comin along nicely. All verses have a little filler, but punchlines are definitely the harder part for me. When I spit I'm always on beat and I think my multis are coo tho. So look forward to more battles.

Never really battle rapped, but I still handle cats
Hotter than candle wax, give you more sh*t than a cattle ranch

[Sicilian Spit]

By the way, did people understand the Houston reference? Or the one about Jonestown?

[Sicilian Spit]

Yo, Witness, you see this yet?

[Witness]

Ya I saw it , damn man, need to say the truth, u killed me.
Damn , I spelled ur name wrong , oh ****, need to work on my english :blink:
Well, some other time ill get ya , need more practice, I can say that u are coming up very nicely.