View Full Version : Puncho vs somenerve
#1rapper
09-09-07, 09:16 PM
just out of pure curiosity..why are u so obsessed with ppl droppin first
# 1 U Want Problems Ay Dog Its On Cuz I Dont Do Beef I Do Filet Mignon/my Lyrics Is Dope Like A Drug Dont Make Me Have 2 Fill U Up Wit Slugz/this Rap Thing Is Easy I Win Wit Out A Sweat Im Bored Can Somebody Give Me A Real Test/u # 1 Till I Stepped On The Scene Im The Top Dawg U Can B My Queen/u Probaly On Yo Computer Grabbn Yo 6alls Battlin Me Is Like A Freefall/i Take Yo Raps And I P1ss On Them Like I Just Drank Juice U Like The Bobcats Its Just No Use/i Am 2 Rappin What Guns Is 2 Strappin U Know That Im Dope So U Should Just Start Clappin/please Dont Start Talkn Sh1t Cuz Ill Leave U N My Shadow Like Marcus Vick/im Done 4 Now U Can Spit Next Cuz My Flow Is Dangerous Like Unprotected Sex
Yo Turn U No That Was Hard
somenerve
09-09-07, 11:55 PM
Yo no one waste a moment on this
Just a few seconds I need, I got him
Yo P, I got you figured all out it's unfortunate
I know now you're blind and you typin on braille
But you ain't able to see how bad you look right now
Don't listen to your older brother, he told ya you spit fire
He means well, but here's some tough love...He's a liar
Truth be told ya just gots no f-f-f-flow, ya out ya league on this one
I know I know ya got some gunz, sorry dawg in here bullets bounce
Only one weapon allowed a pen as a sword, only weapon that counts
Ecliptik
09-10-07, 12:39 AM
umm...ok...
puncho: well.....ya rhyme scheme is a bit better then somenerve's but alot of your punches and mets are really incomplete....i mean not even a set up that makes sense to most of the lines...but i see the attempts...kinda....
i Take Yo Raps And I P1ss On Them Like I Just Drank Juice U Like The Bobcats Its Just No Use/
what in the hell does that mean???
somenerve: ya flow scheme wasn't the cleanest....but your verse made ALOT more sense than PUNCHO's did...your punches coulda been a little better....no.....they shoulda been better.....but eh...they made sense!!!!!
puncho may think this vote is bull**** but it's the truth....somenerve won due to making more sense....and that is it...cause to be honest...the punches were half ass on both sides...
theman080
09-10-07, 09:43 AM
# 1 U Want Problems Ay Dog Its On Cuz I Dont Do Beef I Do Filet Mignon/my Lyrics Is Dope Like A Drug Dont Make Me Have 2 Fill U Up Wit Slugz/this Rap Thing Is Easy I Win Wit Out A Sweat Im Bored Can Somebody Give Me A Real Test/u # 1 Till I Stepped On The Scene Im The Top Dawg U Can B My Queen/u Probaly On Yo Computer Grabbn Yo 6alls Battlin Me Is Like A Freefall/i Take Yo Raps And I P1ss On Them Like I Just Drank Juice U Like The Bobcats Its Just No Use/i Am 2 Rappin What Guns Is 2 Strappin U Know That Im Dope So U Should Just Start Clappin/please Dont Start Talkn Sh1t Cuz Ill Leave U N My Shadow Like Marcus Vick/im Done 4 Now U Can Spit Next Cuz My Flow Is Dangerous Like Unprotected Sex
Yo Turn U No That Was Hard
I just overdosed off the realness
Cali_Bud
09-10-07, 10:53 AM
I just overdosed off the realness
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: You know, I actually thought that this guy had someone write some versus or something for him because of the way he just popped up challenging people..but I guess not.:thumbsdow
Ecliptik
09-10-07, 12:11 PM
and now you see why i refused to demolish this punk:dry:
somenerve
09-14-07, 11:00 PM
Yo E, thanks for the points you made, I just figured I had done this already with this cat and put him to rest and it wasn't too hard. Then he calls you out and #1. So i just took on some no dissin really just constructive criticism in some lyrics.
This thread is all the same, so many agree....this kat he should really chill on lookin for battles.
#1 I agree with what you said first, why son doesn't ever drop first?
As for my scheme I think it's awkward because I never wrote to a beat, so I think format is affected by that and I messin around always something I post is at the moment it was wrote, to hear the comments and advice and so forth.
It all seems like I'm alot older than most members in these threads.
Anyway I'm zooted and babblin...until the next one.
S.Nerve
Ecliptik
09-14-07, 11:05 PM
yes...you prolly are older then most...lmao....you big dust fart you....
somenerve
09-14-07, 11:44 PM
LOL...come on a little respect for the elderly!
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