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Ecliptik
09-09-07, 06:19 PM
*blackout*

Finger print my blue print since birth, enter redemption..
Death is certain, Live to die is my intention..
You've seen me kill, you hide in witness protection..
Cause i scrape skin pigments to mimic niqqas reflection..
Check the heat, the kitchens in order for your inspection..
I'm not what your expectin, ill - lyrical injection..
Like self destruct frequencies, i deny rejection..
Suspect my mind enhancin flow like head to head erection..
Don't test em, the black burnah will bless em..
Smith-n-Wessen to chest, the vest won't ressurect em..
Finger print my blue print since birth, enter redemption..
Death is certain, Live to die is my intention..
Stress tension, the best bet is life suspension..
Give no support like boxers without the button..
Fucc knowledge is power, i grew up in detention..
Bench men, follow ***s without comprehension..
Bein sloppy is inspiration to fuelin determination..
Frequent debatin just counts down they termination..
Keep buggin and ask for your extermination..
If you original, i'm a nightmare of your creation..
Finger print my blue print since birth, enter redemption..
Death is certain, Live to die is my intention..
Whoever hatin is gay from my interpretation..
Say what you say, then edit terms and erase em..
Transparent b!tch moves, my vision won't phase em..
These weak end emcees get dropped after i days em..
Clip ain't retired, came out of hibernation..
Crews don't do sh!t, i prefer isolation..
Abuse you, who still writes off masturbation..
Dickride by a show of hands like self manipulation..
Finger print my blue print since birth, enter redemption..
Death is certain, Live to die is my intention..
Rawcores the spore from spawnin devils temptation..
I'm here to make a statement and bully the fuccin nation..
Wit lyrical artileration to face verbal engagement..
Make all of you quit rappin, take a permanent vacation..
Send you wit bags packin, Grey Hound will be the station..
Or sent to hospital, filed as a patient..
I'll look for your replacement, make an extension..
Of life band suspension, increasin the connection..
Sex offendin, puttin style in fornication..
Piss off emcee'z, if they leak i call it urination..
Computers couldn't calculate clip with observation..
So they named me as a star, since the sky my destination..
To end it all, comets fall for murder, premeditation..
I'm bad to the bone cause wit joints, it's separation..
Finger print my blue print since birth, enter redemption..
Death is certain, Live to die is my intention..
And i tend to space out, until i divide dementions..
Then multiply my own thoughts, until the math is mentioned..
If i touch myself too much, i'm told i'll lose my vision..
But thats according to the braille after breaking it's encryption..
I steady bully the bass line, the beat gives no permission..
So sik my pen is illin, penicillins my prescription..
If you lookin for dirty p., expect no staralization..
Me wit a clean mouth's a figment of your imagination..
So if my humor runs dry, i'll let you apply the lubrication..
And you can knock these kids out by process of elimination..
Finger print my blue print since birth, enter redemption..
Death is certain, Live to die is my intention..

Cali_Bud
09-09-07, 07:22 PM
*blackout*
Finger print my blue print since birth, eneter redemption..
Death is certain, Live to die is my intention..
You've seen me kill, you hide in witness protection..
Cause i scrape skin pigments to mimic niqqas reflection..
Check the heat, the kitchens in order for your inspection..
I'm not what your expectin, ill - lyrical injection..
Like self destruct frequences, i deny rejection..
Suspect my mind enhancin flow like head to head erection..
Don't test em, the black burnah will bless em..
Smith-n-Wessen to chest, the vest won't ressurect em..
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Good lord...you have out done yourself clip! This is hot as hell. I actually like this better than the first

Ecliptik
09-10-07, 06:13 PM
^...uppity

Child Proof
09-10-07, 06:49 PM
Real nice drop...flow and wordplay made it fluid to read. On a side note...I guess the suffix or sound "tion" was the theme but it felt short changed or lazy...IMHO...call me ignorant to where you were goin with it...that's just my opinion. Nice! Nonetheless.

Ecliptik
09-10-07, 06:52 PM
not really goin anywhere wit it...it just ended up that way....thanx for the feed....

theman080
09-11-07, 12:43 PM
never seen 'tion' more in a drop...

ever

Ths was pretty dope, kind of expected it to take off more after the first few lines but it had its ups and downs and it didnt take it to the point I thought it could of. The Phoenix drop was iller, both should be done on audio, go get yourself a ten dollar mic you broke fukk...

Ecliptik
09-12-07, 12:14 AM
damn...and i focused on this one more then that damn phoenix...lol