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Witness
09-06-07, 03:05 PM
Im going for the biggest price there is

that price is your heart, it is your soul
to get close is my only goal, then I can do what the God wish
one , wish or tree , like the spirit from the bottle
I serve you my love, lot of
things to do, so little time, maybe I pass my rhyme
to the next generation of loving crime
blame me that I did this song to , stunning heart
dont get angry, for the mistakes we´ll do
all of this nunsense isn´t nunsense at all
as I recall, when I thought about you
I were inside cell wall´s

Those wall´s Im talking about are the angel falls
the park where we used to look the stars
chat until morning, until the duty calls
you were mine, and I were your superstars
the night´s were ours
going home afterwards, thinking you
and smoking some cigars, playing guitar
getting no sleep, having problems to sleep
counting sheep´s, called you
you were fast asleep, so I wanted to keep
you asleep, didnt want to wake you
from that moment I knew to pursue

to get attach to you, wanted to always bump into you
from different angle of view, I remember you
wearing navy blue, walking shoe´s eating chicken stew
I were immidiatly falling into you
thinking this is just dream, next thing ill be in katmandu
but it wasn´t a dream, hopefully this song is our theme
and that we are together the supreme
and extreme defending team
I can only say seize the day, carpe diem

I waited it to happen, now I ask you to come near
Cuz you are here, with me docking our ship to the home pier
and if our boat start sinking, I will volunteer
to get over board, even if that meant me to disappear
Ill do it for you my love, Ill fight at the frontier
hold dear, that nothing severe will happen today in here
I want you to see capital of Zaire, and taste weiss beer
I just dont want you to be the last to say sincere




Song to my girl, give comments good or bad, anykind, critisism... Right now recording this song, with all **** in it, truly , need comments...

Sicilian Spit
09-06-07, 06:27 PM
Not feelin this, probly cuz the rhymes were too ordinary
Plus, ya pic's sorta scary, looks like a body from the mortuary
Ya girl adores it very much but it sucks
But don't worry, I'll ghostwrite for you for a couple bucks

Naw, just clownin. On the real tho, this doesnt even sound like rap. Are you in the right forum?